Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban Anda kurang alami dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Misalnya, gunakan kalimat yang langsung menyatakan kejadian dan alasan dengan struktur yang benar.

例: Yes, I recently borrowed some money from my friend Aria because I forgot to bring my wallet and needed to buy food.

提案: Jawaban Anda terlalu panjang dan kurang terstruktur dengan baik. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta perbaiki tata bahasa agar lebih alami dan efektif.

例: Yes, I often lend money to others when they need it, especially if they don't have enough to buy food or other essentials.

× He borrowed me money for both food because I forgot to bring my wallet.

✓ He lent me money for both food because I forgot to bring my wallet.

The verb 'borrow' means to take something from someone temporarily, while 'lend' means to give something temporarily. The sentence incorrectly uses 'borrowed' when it should be 'lent' because the friend gave money to the speaker. Also, the pronoun 'me' is correctly used as the indirect object here.

× I always lend my money to the other if they need some money or if they didn't have enough money to buy food or something, I will lend it my money.

✓ I always lend my money to others if they need some money or if they don't have enough money to buy food or something, I will lend them my money.

The phrase 'the other' is incorrect here; it should be 'others' to refer to people in general. Also, the pronoun 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'didn't' to maintain present tense consistency. Additionally, 'lend it my money' is incorrect; it should be 'lend them my money' because 'them' refers to people receiving the money.