Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「a airplane ticket」ではなく「an airplane ticket」、「go back to home」ではなく「go back home」が正しいです。また、「there are not enough monies」は不自然で、「I didn't have enough money」が適切です。さらに、回答が少し冗長で、より簡潔にまとめることが望ましいです。接続詞を使って文をつなげると、より自然で流暢な印象を与えられます。

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my sister when I was a student because I didn't have enough money for daily expenses. For example, I needed to buy an airplane ticket to go back home, but I couldn't afford it at that time.

提案: 回答に文法ミスと不自然な表現が多く見られます。まず、「rented money」ではなく「lent money」が正しいです。また、「without exact reasons」より「without a good reason」や「without a valid reason」が自然です。さらに、「this instruction is a very effective for me」は不自然で、「this advice has been very effective for me」などが適切です。最後の文が未完成で、意味が伝わりにくいです。回答は簡潔にし、文を完結させることが重要です。

例: No, I have never lent money to others because my parents advised me not to do so unless there is a good reason. This advice has helped me avoid potential problems.

× But there are not enough monies.

✓ But there is not enough money.

'Money' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'monies' in this context. Use 'money' as singular and uncountable.

× I borrowed some money from my sister and that's simply because I don't have enough money to spend every day.

✓ I borrowed some money from my sister simply because I didn't have enough money to spend every day.

The phrase 'that's simply because' is awkward here; removing 'that's' and adjusting tense to past ('didn't') improves clarity and correctness.

× Especially I had to buy a airplane ticket to go back to home.

✓ Especially, I had to buy an airplane ticket to go back home.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound ('airplane'). Also, 'go back home' does not require 'to' before 'home'.

× No, I've never rented money to others.

✓ No, I've never lent money to others.

'Rent' means to pay for use, while 'lend' means to give temporarily. The correct verb here is 'lent'.

× this instruction is a very effective for me.

✓ this instruction is very effective for me.

'Effective' is an adjective and does not need the article 'a' before it.

× I've never encountered the.

✓ I've never encountered that.

The sentence is incomplete; 'the' requires a noun following it. Replacing 'the' with 'that' completes the sentence.