Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add specific supporting details using linking words for coherence. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'such instant incident' and use simpler, more natural expressions.

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from others before. For example, when I was a child, I used to borrow money from my mother, but only for school-related expenses.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains a grammatical error ('lended' should be 'lent') and could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details. Try to explain why lending money is difficult for you and how it affects your relationships, using natural vocabulary.

例: Yes, I have lent money to some friends. However, I find it difficult because I feel embarrassed to ask for the money back, which can make the situation uncomfortable.

× Yes, I have lended money to some friends of mine.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to some friends of mine.

The verb 'lend' has an irregular past participle form 'lent', not 'lended'. Using 'lended' is incorrect. The present perfect tense requires the past participle form, so 'have lent' is correct.