Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from others before. For example, I once borrowed some money from a friend when I didn't have enough cash to pay for my expenses that day.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I have lent money to others, especially to my girlfriend. For instance, I lent her some money when she needed to buy textbooks for her studies.

× That I sometime borrow borrow money for a girlfriend because I not have money for it today.

✓ Sometimes I borrow money for my girlfriend because I do not have money for it today.

The sentence has errors in verb tense and form. 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The verb 'borrow' is repeated unnecessarily. 'I not have' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not have' to form the negative present tense. Also, 'a girlfriend' should be 'my girlfriend' to indicate possession. The corrected sentence uses proper present tense and negation.

× Just ever leash money for a girlfriend because As for example, you're gonna lie. Call her. I give money for all for her. Bye.

✓ I have only ever lent money to my girlfriend because, for example, if she is going to lie, I call her. I give money to her for everything. Goodbye.

The sentence contains multiple errors: 'leash' should be 'lent' (past participle of 'lend'). 'Just ever' is awkward; 'only ever' is better. 'a girlfriend' should be 'my girlfriend' for possession. The phrase 'you're gonna lie' is unclear; assuming it means 'if she is going to lie'. 'Call her' is a fragment; it should be connected properly. 'I give money for all for her' is incorrect; it should be 'I give money to her for everything'. 'Bye' is informal and should be 'Goodbye' in this context. The corrections address past tense, pronouns, and sentence structure.