Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言有些重复且不够自然。建议避免重复表达相同意思，简化句子结构，使回答更流畅自然。

例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I prefer to manage my finances carefully. I find owing money stressful, so I always try to avoid it.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“learned”应为“lent”，句子结构较复杂且不够连贯。建议使用正确词汇，简化句子，并使用连接词使表达更清晰。

例: Yes, about six months ago, I lent a large sum of money to my friend who needed an emergency operation due to a serious illness. This money really helped him save his life.

× Owing to owing money to other people is something I found very uncomfortable and stressful, so I make sure to avoid it whenever possible.

✓ Owing to owing money to other people is something I find very uncomfortable and stressful, so I make sure to avoid it whenever possible.

这里的动词时态应与主句保持一致，表示现在的感受，因此应使用一般现在时的动词形式“find”，而不是过去时“found”。

× Actually, I have learned a large sum of money to my friend about half a year ago as he was experiencing a deadly disease and needs emergency operation, and this sum of money really saved his life.

✓ Actually, I lent a large sum of money to my friend about half a year ago as he was experiencing a deadly disease and needed an emergency operation, and this sum of money really saved his life.

这里“have learned”用法错误，正确的过去时态动词是“lent”，表示过去发生的动作；“needs”应改为过去时“needed”，因为描述的是过去的情况；“emergency operation”前应加不定冠词“an”。