Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“borrow others money”应为“borrow money from others”。建议注意介词的使用，并且回答可以更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my classmates to buy snacks during primary and secondary school. Sometimes I forgot my wallet at home, so I needed to borrow money from others to buy food.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“have landed”应为“have lent”，句子结构混乱。建议加强语法基础，使用连贯的句子表达清楚意思。

例: Yes, definitely. I have lent money before. For example, during secondary school, a friend named Amo had some financial problems and asked me to lend her around $500.

× Sometimes I forgot my purse at home so I need to borrow others money for food.

✓ Sometimes I forgot my purse at home so I need to borrow others' money for food.

这里“others money”缺少所有格形式，应该用“others' money”表示“别人的钱”。

× Sometimes I forgot my purse at home so I need to borrow others money for food.

✓ Sometimes I forgot my purse at home so I needed to borrow others' money for food.

前半句用了过去时“forgot”，后半句应保持时态一致，使用过去时“needed”。

× Yes, definitely. I have landed.

✓ Yes, definitely. I have lent money.

“landed”是“land”的过去式，意思是“着陆”，这里应使用“lend”的过去分词“lent”，表示“借出”。

× There's some cash umm during secondary school because one of my friend called Amo, she's had some financial problems and then she asked me around $500.

✓ There was some cash umm during secondary school because one of my friends called Amo, she had some financial problems and then she asked me for around $500.

“one of my friend”应为“one of my friends”，因为“one of”后面接复数名词；“There's”应改为过去时“there was”，与后文时态一致；“asked me around $500”应改为“asked me for around $500”，正确使用介词。

× There's some cash umm during secondary school because one of my friend called Amo, she's had some financial problems and then she asked me around $500.

✓ There was some cash umm during secondary school because one of my friends called Amo, she had some financial problems and then she asked me for around $500.

“she's had”是现在完成时，前文为过去时，应统一为过去时“she had”。