Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更直接地回应问题，避免冗长且不够清晰的表达。可以简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并增加具体细节使回答更丰富。

例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I usually manage my expenses carefully. If I ever need extra money, I would ask my parents for help since they support me financially.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使表达更连贯。同时，提供具体原因和例子会使回答更有说服力。

例: No, I have never lent money to others because I prefer to avoid financial complications. For example, lending money might cause misunderstandings if the person cannot repay me on time.

× I try to avoid borrow and lend money to others so that I won't draft into a dilemma that I have to ask them to send money if they have borrowed it from me.

✓ I try to avoid borrowing and lending money to others so that I won't get into a dilemma where I have to ask them to send money if they have borrowed it from me.

动词avoid后应接动名词形式，不能直接接动词原形borrow和lend。此处应改为borrowing和lending。

× I try to avoid borrow and lend money to others so that I won't draft into a dilemma that I have to ask them to send money if they have borrowed it from me.

✓ I try to avoid borrowing and lending money to others so that I won't get into a dilemma where I have to ask them to send money if they have borrowed it from me.

短语中应使用固定搭配get into a dilemma，不能用draft into。此处draft用法错误，应改为get。

× No, as a student I seldom use a lot of money and if I have to fix this situation, I would like to ask my parents for advice and they may send enough money to me.

✓ No, as a student I seldom use a lot of money, and if I have to fix this situation, I would like to ask my parents for advice, and they may send me enough money.

句子中缺少逗号分隔复合句，且“send enough money to me”表达不自然，应改为“send me enough money”。此外，句子结构较长，适当断句更清晰。