Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động và thuyết phục.

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends or family when I forgot to bring my wallet. For example, once I needed to buy breakfast but didn't have cash, so my mother lent me some money.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy giải thích lý do hoặc hoàn cảnh cụ thể để câu trả lời thêm phần thuyết phục.

例: Yes, I often lend money to my friends when they need help. For instance, last month I lent some money to a friend who forgot his wallet at home.

× Yes, actually, sometimes I forgot to bring my money, so I would like to have a hand with my friend or my mother to borrow some money to buy breakfast or an item that is really useful at that time.

✓ Yes, actually, sometimes I forget to bring my money, so I would like to have a hand from my friend or my mother to borrow some money to buy breakfast or an item that is really useful at that time.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' is more appropriate. Also, the phrase 'have a hand with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'have a hand from' or better 'ask for help from'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, of course, Why not? I'm really I'm really pleasant to lend money to others because they are. So lend me the money first so I could like to help them.

✓ Yes, of course, why not? I'm really happy to lend money to others because they lend me money first, so I would like to help them.

The word 'pleasant' is incorrectly used; the correct adjective is 'happy' to express willingness. The sentence 'because they are' is incomplete and unclear; it should specify 'because they lend me money first'. Also, 'so lend me the money first so I could like to help them' is ungrammatical and unclear; it is corrected to 'so I would like to help them' to express intention properly. Pronouns and sentence structure are corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.