Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法错误影响了表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意动词时态和形式，如"borrow"应为"borrowed"，"ask"应为"asking"。此外，回答可以更简洁，避免重复表达。

例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I believe it can harm friendships. Since I dislike being asked for money, I try not to ask others either.

提案: 回答内容清晰，但存在动词形式错误，如"lend"应为"lent"。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，例如"however"。同时，可以增加具体细节来丰富回答。

例: Yes, I have lent money to others, but I almost never got it back. Since then, I haven't lent money to anyone, however close we are.

× No, I haven't borrow money from others because I believe this action would damage my relationship with my friends.

✓ No, I haven't borrowed money from others because I believe this action would damage my relationship with my friends.

The verb 'borrow' should be in the past participle form 'borrowed' after 'haven't' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× Although I don't like others ask me for money so I try not to do the same to others.

✓ Although I don't like others asking me for money, I try not to do the same to others.

After 'like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form ('asking') to function as a gerund. Also, the sentence should be split with a comma instead of 'so' to avoid a run-on sentence.

× Yes, I have lend money to others and I almost couldn't get it back.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to others and I almost couldn't get it back.

The verb 'lend' should be in the past participle form 'lent' after 'have' to correctly form the present perfect tense.