Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“haven't borrow”应为“haven't borrowed”。此外，表达不够自然，且“boring”用词不当，应为“borrowing”。建议注意时态和词汇的准确使用，避免语法错误。

例: No, I haven't borrowed money from others because I prefer to manage my finances carefully to avoid borrowing. Also, I feel uncomfortable owing money to others, so I try to avoid it.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“sent money”应为“lent money”，“I am not always say no person”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的表达，注意句子结构和时态，提升语言的自然流畅度。

例: Yes, I have lent money to others because I find it hard to say no. When people ask me, I usually agree, although I don't like the feeling of lending money.

× No, I haven't borrow money from others because I prefer to manage my finances carefully to avoid boring and I feel uncomfortable owning money to others so I avoid it.

✓ No, I haven't borrowed money from others because I prefer to manage my finances carefully to avoid borrowing and I feel uncomfortable owing money to others so I avoid it.

这里的助动词'haven't'后面应该接动词的过去分词形式，'borrow'应改为'borrowed'。另外，'boring'是形容词，意思是'无聊的'，应改为动名词'borrowing'表示'借钱'的动作。'owning money'应改为'owing money'，因为'owe'表示'欠钱'，'own'表示'拥有'。

× Yes, I've sent money to others because I am not always say no person.

✓ Yes, I've lent money to others because I do not always say no to people.

'I've sent'中的'sent'是'send'的过去分词，但这里应该用'lent'，因为题目是借钱，'lend'是'借出'的意思。'I am not always say no person'语法错误，应该用一般现在时的否定形式'do not always say no'，并且'no person'应改为'no to people'。

× I am not familiar with rejection so when people asked me to lend money I would say OK fine, but I don't think it's a good thing because actually I don't like this feeling.

✓ I am not familiar with rejection, so when people ask me to lend money, I would say OK fine, but I don't think it's a good thing because actually I don't like this feeling.

'when people asked me'应改为一般现在时'when people ask me'以保持时态一致。句中缺少逗号以分隔从句。