Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强语法练习，使用更自然的表达方式，并且在回答中加入连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my close friends when I didn't have enough budget to buy something or cover my daily expenses.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如主谓不一致，且表达不够清晰。建议注意时态和主谓一致，使用更准确的词汇，并且使句子结构更简洁明了。

例: Yes, I have lent money to my close friends when they needed help, after carefully considering their situation.

× Yes I have, when I have lack of budget to buy something or afford my outcome dailies I would borrow from my Co friends.

✓ Yes, I have. When I lack the budget to buy something or afford my daily expenses, I borrow from my close friends.

句中“when I have lack of budget”中“have lack”用法错误，应直接用“lack”表示缺乏；“outcome dailies”表达不准确，应为“daily expenses”（日常开销）；“would borrow”时态不合适，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时“borrow”。此外，句子缺少逗号分隔，影响理解。建议改为“when I lack the budget... I borrow...”以符合语法和表达习惯。

× Yes, I have, one of my close friends have needed their help and I will consider this situation and lend money to them.

✓ Yes, I have. One of my close friends has needed help, and I will consider the situation and lend money to them.

句中“one of my close friends have”主语是单数“one”，谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”；“needed their help”表达不准确，应为“needed help”；“this situation”前缺少逗号，且“consider this situation”表达更自然应为“consider the situation”。建议调整主谓一致并修正表达，使句子更通顺。