Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答结构清晰，内容具体且自然，但可以增加一些连接词使表达更连贯，同时避免重复表达“borrowed money from others”和“small loan”。建议在回答中使用更多连接词如“because”、“so”来增强逻辑性。

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from close friends or family members a few times because I faced unexpected expenses, such as urgent medical bills. Therefore, I asked for a small loan to manage the situation, and I always make sure to repay the money promptly to maintain trust.

提案: 回答中出现了拼写错误（"learned"应为"lent"），且句子结构略显简单。建议注意用词准确，避免拼写错误，同时可以使用更多连接词和具体细节来丰富回答。

例: Yes, I have lent money to a couple of close friends or family members because I believe in helping people in genuine need. For instance, I once lent money to a friend who urgently needed it for medical expenses, and I was happy to support them since the amount was manageable for me.

× Yes, I have lent money to others on a few occasions, usually two close friends or family members.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to others on a few occasions, usually to two close friends or family members.

这里缺少介词“to”，导致句子结构不完整。应在“usually”和“two close friends”之间加上“to”，表示借钱的对象。

× For example, I once learned some money to a friend who needed it urgently for medical expenses.

✓ For example, I once lent some money to a friend who needed it urgently for medical expenses.

动词“learned”用错，正确的过去式应为“lent”，表示“借出”的过去时。