Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，且表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误，同时使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because my father always told me that borrowing money can be risky for my future.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用正确的时态和人称，明确说明借钱的原因，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I have lent money to my best friend because she wanted to invest in a company. Before lending, I asked her some questions to make sure I could trust her.

× Well, this question is never I never borrow money from others that's that's because my father always told me that a person is student borrow money from others because it is a dangerous way for your future and if I.

✓ Well, I have never borrowed money from others because my father always told me that a student borrowing money from others is dangerous for their future.

原句结构混乱，语序不正确，导致句意不清。应调整句子结构，使表达更连贯，符合英语表达习惯。

× Absolutely, I have learn some money to my best friend, he have borrowed the money because she wants to invest a company and I have asked some questions to trust him so.

✓ Absolutely, I have lent some money to my best friend. He borrowed the money because he wanted to invest in a company, and I asked some questions to trust him.

动词时态使用错误，如“have learn”应为“have lent”，“he have borrowed”应为“he borrowed”，且代词使用不当。应使用正确的过去时态和代词以表达清楚时间和主语。