Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并且注意时态和单复数的正确使用。此外，回答可以更自然流畅，适当使用连接词使内容更连贯。

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from others, especially during my school days. For instance, I often forgot to bring money for snacks after school, so I would borrow from my friends.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但语法和表达不够准确，建议注意时态一致性和句子结构的完整性。同时，可以使用连接词使叙述更流畅，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I have lent money to others. For example, a relative borrowed a large sum from me before I started college, but she didn't repay it fully until I was about to graduate, which was quite an unpleasant experience.

× I usua usually buy some snacks after school with my friend but there's a lot of time I forgot to bring the money so I will borrow.

✓ I usually buy some snacks after school with my friends but there are many times I forgot to bring the money so I would borrow.

这里的错误是单复数问题。'friend' 应该用复数形式 'friends'，因为通常是和多个朋友一起买零食。'there's a lot of time' 应改为 'there are many times'，因为 'times' 是复数，谓语动词也要用复数形式。建议注意名词的单复数形式和与之对应的谓语动词形式。

× I usua usually buy some snacks after school with my friend but there's a lot of time I forgot to bring the money so I will borrow.

✓ I usually buy some snacks after school with my friends but there are many times I forgot to bring the money so I would borrow.

这里的 'will' 用于过去的习惯动作不合适，应该用 'would' 表示过去经常发生的动作。建议学习情态动词在不同时间表达中的用法。

× It's one of my relative.

✓ It's one of my relatives.

'one of' 后面应该接复数名词，表示 '我的亲戚中的一个'，所以 'relative' 应该用复数形式 'relatives'。建议注意 'one of' 结构后名词的复数形式。

× She borrow a large amount of money from me before I got into the college and didn't return it, didn't fully return it until I almost graduated from college.

✓ She borrowed a large amount of money from me before I got into college and didn't return it, didn't fully return it until I almost graduated from college.

主语是第三人称单数 'She'，动词 'borrow' 应该用过去式 'borrowed'。另外，'got into the college' 中 'the' 不需要，应该是 'got into college'。建议注意第三人称单数动词的过去式形式和冠词的正确使用。