Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยควรตอบตรงคำถามและใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน เช่น "borrow my money from my friends money" ควรปรับให้กระชับและเข้าใจง่ายขึ้น

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends occasionally at school during lunchtime because they don't have access to bank transfers.

提案: ควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้องและประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ เช่น ใช้ "lent" แทน "lend" และปรับคำให้เหมาะสม นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหลและมีความหมายชัดเจน

例: Yes, I have lent money to my friends so they could buy food during lunchtime. Usually, they pay me back in cash or sometimes they buy food for me instead.

× Yes, but not often I will borrow money off my friends at lunchtime on at my school canteen because they don't receive transfer money so I have to borrow my money from my friends money.

✓ Yes, but not often. I borrow money from my friends at lunchtime in my school canteen because they don't receive transferred money, so I have to borrow money from my friends.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'will borrow' which is a future tense modal verb, but the context requires present tense 'borrow' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'off' should be 'from' as the correct preposition for borrowing. 'Transfer money' should be 'transferred money' to use the past participle form correctly. The sentence is also run-on and needs punctuation for clarity.

× Yes, I have ever lend my money to my friend because they borrow my money to buy a food also on lunch time and often they will pay me back into cash form or sometime buy food for me.

✓ Yes, I have lent my money to my friend because they borrowed my money to buy food at lunchtime, and often they pay me back in cash or sometimes buy food for me.

The verb 'lend' should be in past participle form 'lent' after 'have'. 'Borrow' should be past tense 'borrowed' to match the past action. 'A food' is incorrect; 'food' is uncountable and does not need an article. 'On lunch time' should be 'at lunchtime' as the correct preposition and noun form. 'Will pay' is changed to 'pay' to indicate habitual action in present tense. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb.