Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些冗长且缺乏连贯性，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。此外，回答应更直接，避免重复。

例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I started working right after graduation and have been financially independent. Besides, I feel uncomfortable asking friends or family for money.

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，且句子结构稍显复杂。建议使用正确的时态和更简洁的句子，同时使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: No, I have never lent money to others. For instance, last month a friend asked to borrow some money, but I refused because I only have enough to cover my own expenses.

× I never borrowed money from others because after graduation I started working so I have enough money I don't need to borrow money from others and I think borrowing money from friends or parents makes me embarrassed and.

✓ I have never borrowed money from others because after graduation I started working, so I have enough money. I don't need to borrow money from others, and I think borrowing money from friends or parents makes me embarrassed.

句子中使用了“never borrowed”，但根据上下文，表达的是从过去到现在的经历，应该用现在完成时“have never borrowed”。此外，原句缺少标点符号，导致句子过长，建议适当断句。

× No, I had never lend money to others.

✓ No, I have never lent money to others.

这里使用了过去完成时“had never”，但根据上下文，表达的是从过去到现在的经历，应该用现在完成时“have never”。另外，“lend”的过去分词是“lent”，原句中使用了错误的动词形式。