Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“lend”应为“lent”，“appreciate”应为“appreciate her”改为“appreciate it”或“am very grateful to her”。建议注意时态和词汇的正确使用，同时回答可以更简洁自然。

例: Yes, I have. Once, when I was in primary school, I forgot my wallet in the classroom after class. Fortunately, my best friend lent me some money so I could take the bus home. I was very grateful to her for helping me.

提案: 你的回答内容完整且有逻辑，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，建议使用更多连接词如“because”、“so”来使表达更连贯。同时，可以适当简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I have. When I was in senior high school, a quiet girl asked me to lend her some money. I agreed because I wanted to help her. However, she didn't pay me back, so I felt very disappointed. Since then, I have been more careful about lending money to others.

× my best friend kindly lend me some money so that I could take the bus home.

✓ my best friend kindly lent me some money so that I could take the bus home.

这里的动词"lend"应该使用过去式"lent"，因为句子描述的是过去发生的事情。动词时态错误会导致句子时态不一致。

× I had forgotten my wallet at classroom.

✓ I had forgotten my wallet in the classroom.

介词"at"用于表示具体地点时不合适，应该使用"in"表示在教室里面。

× So I'm very appreciate her.

✓ So I really appreciate her.

"appreciate"是动词，前面不能直接用副词"very"修饰，应该用"really"来修饰动词，且"I'm appreciate"结构错误，应改为"I appreciate"。

× asked me if I could lend her some money.

✓ asked me to lend her some money.

动词"ask"后接请求时，应该用"ask sb to do sth"结构，而不是"ask if"。

× she didn't pay me back, which made me feel very disappointed, and since then I have become more careful about lending money to others.

✓ she didn't pay me back, which made me feel very disappointed, and since then I have become more careful about lending money to others.

该句时态使用正确，无需修改。