Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は直接的で明確ですが、文法の誤りと表現の自然さに改善の余地があります。例えば、「saving for future」は「saving for the future」とするべきです。また、回答の流れを良くするために接続詞を使い、より自然な英語表現を心がけましょう。

例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I have always been good at saving for the future. Therefore, I haven't needed to ask my family or friends for financial help.

提案: 回答に文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。特に「earned money to friends」や「rental money for others」という表現は誤りです。正しい動詞や表現を使い、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。接続詞を使って論理的に説明しましょう。

例: No, I have never lent money to my friends or family because I believe it can sometimes damage relationships if the money is not returned on time.

× No, I haven't earned money to friends or family.

✓ No, I haven't lent money to friends or family.

The verb 'earned' is incorrect in this context because the student is talking about lending money, not earning it. The correct past participle form of 'lend' is 'lent'. The sentence should use 'lent' to indicate the action of giving money temporarily.

× I don't like to rental money for others because if someone with the money to me the relationship.

✓ I don't like to lend money to others because if someone owes me money, it affects the relationship.

The word 'rental' is a noun and incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'lend'. Also, the preposition 'for' should be 'to' when indicating the recipient of lending. The phrase 'if someone with the money to me the relationship' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be rephrased to 'if someone owes me money, it affects the relationship' to convey the intended meaning clearly.