Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意时态和句子结构的正确使用，同时避免重复和冗余。可以尝试用更自然流畅的句子表达借钱的经历，并且增加细节使回答更具体。

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my brother when I was in high school. We often went out to eat, but sometimes I didn't have enough money, so I asked him for help.

提案: 回答中存在词汇使用错误和语法问题，如“learned”应为“lent”。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并且在回答中加入更多细节和连接词，使表达更连贯自然。

例: Yes, I have lent money to a friend named Alvin. I lent him money three years ago, but unfortunately, he has not paid me back yet, which makes me feel quite frustrated.

× Why was a high school student, I had a friend, we usually went out to eat meal but I not have enough money.

✓ When I was a high school student, I had a friend. We usually went out to eat meals, but I did not have enough money.

原句缺少连词且句子结构混乱，导致表达不清晰。应使用时间状语从句“when I was a high school student”引导时间背景，并将句子拆分为两个完整句子，确保主谓宾完整。

× I not have enough money.

✓ I did not have enough money.

此处描述过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。原句使用了现在时态且缺少助动词“do”的否定形式，正确表达应为“did not have”。

× I have learned money from one of my general friend Alvin.

✓ I have lent money to one of my general friends, Alvin.

“learned”是“learn”的过去式或过去分词，意思是“学习”，与“借出钱”不符。正确动词是“lend”的过去分词“lent”，表示“借出”。另外，“friend”应为复数“friends”，因为“one of my general friends”表示“我的普通朋友之一”。

× one of my general friend Alvin

✓ one of my general friends, Alvin

“one of”后面应接复数名词，表示“……之一”，因此“friend”应改为复数“friends”。

× I learned it for three years, but he never gave me it back.

✓ I lent it to him three years ago, but he never gave it back to me.

原句时态使用错误，“learned”应为“lent”，且时间状语应明确。动词“give back”后面宾语顺序应为“it back to me”。

× he never gave me it back.

✓ he never gave it back to me.

英语中“give back”后面宾语顺序为“give something back to somebody”，原句宾语顺序错误，应调整为“gave it back to me”。