Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains informal expressions like 'literally paid her off' which can be misunderstood. Try to be more precise and formal, and avoid redundancy such as 'then' and 'Yeah' at the end. Also, provide a bit more detail about the situation to enrich your answer, using linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from a friend once when I needed to pay for an urgent medical expense. Fortunately, I was able to repay her within a month, which strengthened our trust.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors such as 'lended' instead of 'lent' and awkward phrasing like 'helped wait so for her to be able to book a flight'. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific details about the situation.

例: Yes, I have lent a large sum of money to a friend recently because she missed her flight. Therefore, she needed funds to rebook, and I helped her by lending the money so she could reach our final destination on time.

× Yes, currently I lended somebody a huge amount of money because she missed her flight, so she needed money to rebook a flight which I helped wait so for her to be able to book a flight to get to our final destinations.

✓ Yes, currently I have lent somebody a huge amount of money because she missed her flight, so she needed money to rebook a flight which I helped wait for so that she could book a flight to get to our final destination.

The verb 'lended' is incorrect; the past participle of 'lend' is 'lent'. Since the action is recent and relevant to the present, the present perfect tense 'have lent' is appropriate. Also, the phrase 'helped wait so for her' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'helped wait for so that she could' to clarify the purpose. Additionally, 'destinations' should be singular 'destination' to match the context.