Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词存在错误，且句子较长，缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意时态一致性，避免语法错误，并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because my parents always give me enough money to buy what I need. Moreover, I think borrowing money can be inconvenient and might damage friendships.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复的语气词，影响表达的自然性。建议减少口头语，注意动词时态和拼写，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, when I was in senior high school, a friend borrowed some money from me. However, he did not return it, so I have decided not to lend money to friends easily in the future.

× I never borrow the money from others because my parents always give me enough money to buy my necessaries and also I think borrowing money is a kind of inconvenient thing and will broke the friendship.

✓ I never borrow money from others because my parents always give me enough money to buy my necessities, and also I think borrowing money is kind of inconvenient and will break the friendship.

这里“borrowing money is a kind of inconvenient thing”中的“inconvenient”用作名词修饰词不当，应改为形容词“inconvenient”修饰“thing”，同时“a kind of”后面不需要冠词“a”，且“necessaries”应为“necessities”，表示必需品。最后，“will broke”应为“will break”，因为“will”后接动词原形。

× my friends, uh, borrow some money from me, uh, and I learned it to him.

✓ my friends, uh, borrowed some money from me, uh, and I lent it to him.

这里“borrow”应使用过去式“borrowed”，因为描述的是过去发生的事情；“learned it to him”是错误表达，应为“lent it to him”，表示“借给他”。