Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni uttor ta aro spostho o prabhabi korte paren. Prothome prashner uttor dite hobe, tarpor kichu specific karon ba udaharan dite hobe. Linking words babohar kore kotha ta shongjog korte paren. Apnar vocabulary aro bhalo korte hobe, ebong kichu bhul grammar thik korte hobe.

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from others several times because I believe in the saying 'sharing is caring.' For example, when I faced unexpected expenses, my friends helped me financially. This experience has strengthened my relationships with them.

提案: Apnar uttor ta aro spostho o shangjogmoy korte hobe. Prothome prashner uttor dite hobe, tarpor specific karon ba udaharan dite hobe. Linking words babohar kore kotha ta shongjog korte paren. Grammar o vocabulary improve korte hobe, ebong redundancy komate hobe.

例: Yes, I have lent money to others several times because I believe in helping people in need. For instance, when my friends faced financial difficulties, I supported them by lending money. This has helped build trust and strong bonds between us.

× I think it is a method of too strong you're bond to others.

✓ I think it is a method to strengthen your bond with others.

The phrase 'too strong you're bond' is incorrect. 'Too strong' is an adjective phrase that does not fit here, and 'you're' is a contraction of 'you are' which is incorrect in this context. The correct form is 'to strengthen your bond' where 'strengthen' is the verb in base form after 'to', and 'your' is the possessive pronoun. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, in my life I lend money to others several times and in my earlier answered I mentioned that sharing is caring and I feel whenever I give money to others and they are in trouble trouble situation I feel they give some beneficial.

✓ Yes, in my life I have lent money to others several times and in my earlier answer I mentioned that sharing is caring and I feel whenever I give money to others and they are in a trouble situation I feel they give some benefit.

The verb 'lend' should be in the past participle form 'have lent' to indicate past actions relevant to the present. 'Earlier answered' is incorrect; it should be 'earlier answer' as 'answer' is a noun here. The phrase 'trouble trouble situation' is repetitive; one 'trouble' is sufficient. 'Give some beneficial' is incorrect because 'beneficial' is an adjective; the noun 'benefit' should be used instead. These corrections improve tense consistency, word choice, and sentence clarity.