Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: この回答は文法的な誤りや不自然な表現が多く、内容も少し混乱しています。例えば、「it's eat for some sorts of emergencies」は意味が不明瞭で、「bought 1,00,000」は誤用です。より明確で自然な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。

例: Yes, I have. I often borrow money from my friends in emergencies. For example, last year when I was in the hospital, I borrowed 100,000 yen from my closest friend and I repaid it just yesterday.

提案: この回答は意味が伝わりにくく、表現も不自然です。「do not send them with bare hand」や「manage some gas in hand and it to them」は誤った表現です。もっとシンプルで明確な表現を使い、具体的な例を加えると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I have. When a friend asks me for money in an emergency, I try to help them by lending some money so they can have financial support.

× I often borrow money from my friends when and it's eat for some sorts of emergencies such as I remember when I was in hospital last year, I bought 1,00,000 from my closest friend and I returned it yesterday.

✓ I often borrow money from my friends when it's needed for some sorts of emergencies. For example, I remember when I was in hospital last year, I borrowed 100,000 from my closest friend and I returned it yesterday.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear phrasing, such as 'when and it's eat for some sorts of emergencies'. The phrase should be reordered and clarified to 'when it's needed for some sorts of emergencies'. Also, 'bought' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'borrowed'. Additionally, the number format '1,00,000' is nonstandard in English and should be '100,000'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I bought 1,00,000 from my closest friend and I returned it yesterday.

✓ I borrowed 100,000 from my closest friend and I returned it yesterday.

The verb 'bought' is incorrect in this context because the student is talking about borrowing money, not purchasing something. The correct past tense verb is 'borrowed'. This correction aligns the verb with the intended meaning.

× When some friend asked me for money for the emergencies, I often do not send them with bare hand.

✓ When some friends ask me for money for emergencies, I often do not send it to them empty-handed.

The phrase 'send them with bare hand' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'send it to them empty-handed'. Also, 'some friend' should be plural 'some friends' to match the context. Prepositions and idiomatic expressions need to be used correctly for natural English.

× I always manage some gas in hand and it to them so they may get some financial relief.

✓ I always manage to have some cash in hand and give it to them so they may get some financial relief.

The phrase 'manage some gas in hand and it to them' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'manage to have some cash in hand and give it to them'. 'Gas' is incorrect here; 'cash' is appropriate. Also, the pronoun 'it' needs a clear antecedent and the verb 'give' is necessary. This correction clarifies the sentence and corrects pronoun and vocabulary usage.