Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like "a few years ago" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific details about the situation.

例: Yes, I have borrowed money before. For example, a few years ago, I borrowed some money from my mom to buy snacks because I didn't have enough cash at the time.

提案: Your response needs clearer sentence structure and correct pronoun usage. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, provide more specific details about the situation to enrich your answer.

例: Yes, I have lent money to my younger brother. He wanted to buy a gift for his girlfriend, so I lent him a small amount to help him out.

× Maybe it's the few years ago, a few years ago, I want to buy some, buy some candy or some snacks, and I have borrowed some money from my mom.

✓ Maybe it was a few years ago, I wanted to buy some candy or snacks, and I borrowed some money from my mom.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present tense ('it's', 'I want') with a past time reference ('a few years ago'). To maintain consistency, past tense verbs ('was', 'wanted', 'borrowed') should be used when referring to past events.

× I I lend some money to my younger brother because he want to buy some gift to her girlfriend.

✓ I lent some money to my younger brother because he wanted to buy a gift for his girlfriend.

The verb 'want' should be in the third person singular past tense 'wanted' to agree with the singular subject 'he'. Also, 'lend' should be in past tense 'lent' to match the past context.

× So I just lend a little to her to him.

✓ So I just lent a little to him.

The phrase 'to her to him' is confusing and incorrect. Since the money was lent to the younger brother, the correct pronoun is 'him'. The extra 'to her' is unnecessary and should be removed.