Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但句子结构较为混乱，存在语法错误和重复表达。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I borrowed some money from my high school classmates last week because I recently quit my job and don't have enough savings to cover my expenses.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，同时避免重复表达。

例: No, I haven't lent money to others. However, I have paid for my friends at restaurants, and they usually repay me quickly.

× Yes, I just borrowed money from my high school classmates last week because I quit my job recently so I don't have much money to leave so I need to borrow some money from other people.

✓ Yes, I borrowed money from my high school classmates last week because I quit my job recently, so I don't have much money left and need to borrow some money from other people.

句中“just borrowed”与“last week”时间状语重复，建议去掉“just”；“to leave”应为“left”，表示“剩下的钱”；句子较长，建议用逗号分隔，使句意更清晰。

× No I haven't lent money to others, I just paid money for others at the restaurant but my friend return the money back quickly so I not really lend them money to others.

✓ No, I haven't lent money to others. I just paid money for others at the restaurant, but my friend returned the money quickly, so I didn't really lend them money.

“return”应使用过去式“returned”，因为动作发生在过去；“not really lend”应改为过去式“didn't really lend”；句子缺少逗号和句号，建议分句使表达更清晰。