Money— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
受験者
As much as possible I don't try to borrow money from someone because I don't feel very comfortable to borrow money with others. So if I need emergency money that I might call my parents and if they possible give me my give me money then they will give. Otherwise I call my parent or uncle for money.
試験官
Have you ever lent money to others?
受験者
Yes, Sir. As much as possible I try to support someone whenever they need. Like a last couple of months ago, I meet a friends, uh, who are really need money and that moment, uh, I have a cash and uh, I immediately gave him and yeah.
評価
総合
Part 1
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
スコア: 60.0提案: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar, sentence structure, and clarity. Try to make your sentences shorter and more direct. Use linking words like 'if' and 'otherwise' correctly and avoid repetition. Also, try to provide more specific details about why you feel uncomfortable borrowing money and how you handle emergencies.
例: I usually avoid borrowing money because it makes me feel uncomfortable. However, in emergencies, I ask my parents or uncle for help. For example, last month I needed money urgently, so I called my parents, and they kindly lent me some.
Have you ever lent money to others?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer shows willingness to help, but the grammar and sentence flow need improvement. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use past tense correctly. Also, provide clearer details about the situation to make your answer more specific and natural.
例: Yes, I often try to help friends in need. For instance, a couple of months ago, I met a friend who urgently needed money. Fortunately, I had some cash with me, so I lent it to him immediately.
文法
× if they possible give me my give me money then they will give
✓ if they possibly give me money then they will give
The modal verb 'possible' is incorrectly used here; the correct adverb form is 'possibly' to indicate possibility. In English, modal verbs or adverbs should be used correctly to express likelihood or ability.
× I meet a friends, uh, who are really need money
✓ I met a friend, uh, who really needed money
The noun 'friends' is plural but the verb 'meet' is in present tense and singular context; also 'are really need' is incorrect. The correct form is past tense 'met' with singular 'friend' and past tense verb 'needed' to match the past event described.
× I meet a friends, uh, who are really need money and that moment, uh, I have a cash and uh, I immediately gave him and yeah
✓ I met a friend, uh, who really needed money and at that moment, uh, I had cash and, uh, I immediately gave it to him, and yeah
The verbs 'meet', 'are', 'have' should be in past tense to match the past time frame. Also, 'a cash' is incorrect; 'cash' is uncountable and does not need an article. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.
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