Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains many hesitations and unclear phrases. To improve, try to speak more fluently and clearly, avoid filler words like 'uh', and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons. For example, explain why the salary date and due dates do not match and how that affects your need to borrow money.

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from others occasionally because my salary is paid later than when my bills are due. For instance, sometimes I need to pay rent or utilities before I receive my paycheck, so I borrow money to cover these expenses temporarily.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations, making it hard to understand. To improve, provide a complete and clear response with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words. Also, clarify the situation with specific examples.

例: Yes, I have lent money to friends before because their paychecks arrive after their bills are due. For example, a friend once needed help paying their phone bill on time, so I lent them some money until they got paid.

× Yes, sometime I borrowed money from others because uh, dates of my and dues and uh, uh, the salary date did do not match.

✓ Yes, sometimes I borrowed money from others because, uh, the dates of my dues and, uh, the salary date do not match.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'dates of my and dues' is unclear and should be 'the dates of my dues'. The verb 'did do not match' is incorrect; it should be 'do not match' to agree with the plural subject 'dates'.

× So uh, uh, I have to borrow money.

✓ So, uh, uh, I have to borrow money.

No grammatical error in modal verb usage here; the sentence is correct as it expresses necessity in the present tense.

× Yes, sometime I have lent money to others because uh. Their salary date you know does not match with their board with their dues date, so they need.

✓ Yes, sometimes I have lent money to others because, uh, their salary date, you know, does not match with their dues date, so they need to borrow money.

Again, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The phrase 'board with their dues date' is unclear and likely a mistake; it should be removed or corrected to 'with their dues date'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'so they need'; it should be completed for clarity, e.g., 'so they need to borrow money.'