Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are natural and coherent.

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from others before. For example, once I forgot my wallet at home, so I had to ask a friend to lend me some money. However, nowadays, with mobile payment apps, I rarely need to borrow money from others.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct response, then add specific details with linking words to make your answer more coherent and effective.

例: Yes, I have lent money to others before. For instance, if a friend forgets their wallet at home, I usually pay for them first, and they repay me later.

× Yes I did when I forgot the word at my house.

✓ Yes, I did when I forgot my wallet at my house.

The word 'word' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'wallet' to make sense. Also, a comma is needed after 'Yes' for correct punctuation.

× So I have to borrow money from the others.

✓ So I had to borrow money from others.

The phrase 'the others' is incorrect here; 'others' without 'the' is appropriate. Also, the tense should be past ('had to') to match the previous sentence.

× But this day we can use the phone to pay, so it doesn't happen to me much to borrow money from the others, right?

✓ But nowadays we can use the phone to pay, so it doesn't happen to me much to borrow money from others, right?

The phrase 'this day' is unnatural; 'nowadays' is better. Also, 'the others' should be 'others' without 'the' in this context.

× Yes, in the same way if someone forgot the warrant at house I can offer my money and pay for them first and then they give me back.

✓ Yes, in the same way, if someone forgot their wallet at home, I can offer my money and pay for them first, and then they give it back to me.

The word 'warrant' is incorrect; it should be 'wallet'. 'At house' should be 'at home'. Also, 'their' is better than 'the' for possession. Added commas for clarity. 'Give me back' should be 'give it back to me' for correct object placement.