Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，存在语法和用词错误，且句子结构不清晰。建议简化句子，避免冗余，使用更准确的词汇，并注意语法正确。

例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I think it can create an awkward atmosphere. If someone refuses or hesitates, it might damage our relationship.

提案: 回答中表达了个人经历和感受，但语法错误较多，句子不够连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

例: Yes, when I was young, I lent money to a friend who never paid me back. Because of that experience, I would refuse if someone asked me to lend money again.

× Actually I never borrowed money from others because I think it's a word and where atmosphere.

✓ Actually, I have never borrowed money from others because I think it's a weird and awkward atmosphere.

这里的时间状语“never”通常与现在完成时连用，表示从过去到现在的经历，所以应使用现在完成时“have never borrowed”。另外，原句中“word and where atmosphere”应为“weird and awkward atmosphere”，是拼写错误。

× When you borrow money from others, if they say no or give you a politely infuse you will also feel embarrassed and this may broke your relationship.

✓ When you borrow money from others, if they say no or give you a polite refusal, you will also feel embarrassed and this may break your relationship.

“politely”是副词，修饰动词，但这里需要一个名词“refusal”来表达“拒绝”，所以应改为“a polite refusal”。另外，“broke”是过去式，句中应使用动词原形“break”。

× Yes, while I was young I didn't know the bonds of the money and friendship.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I didn't know the bonds between money and friendship.

“while”用于表示“当……的时候”时，通常指一段时间，改为“when”更合适。并且“the bonds of the money and friendship”表达不准确，应为“the bonds between money and friendship”。

× I have learned money to someone but they didn't give money back.

✓ I lent money to someone but they didn't give the money back.

“have learned”是“learn”的过去分词，意思是“学会”，这里应使用“lent”，即“借出”的过去式。

× So I feel angry and embarrassed if I face the same situations in the next time. I would definitely say refuse.

✓ So I feel angry and embarrassed if I face the same situation next time. I would definitely refuse.

“situations”应为单数“situation”，因为指的是同一种情况。短语“in the next time”应改为“next time”。“say refuse”表达不正确，应直接用动词“refuse”。