App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and lacks proper sentence structure. Try to form complete sentences and avoid listing apps without explanation. Also, avoid redundancy and use correct grammar, for example, say 'I use many apps on my phone such as Instagram, Snapchat, WhatsApp, and Facebook.'

例: I use many apps on my phone such as Instagram, Snapchat, WhatsApp, and Facebook because they help me stay connected with my friends and family.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to clearly state the types of apps you like and explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas. For example, say 'I am usually interested in social media apps like Instagram and Snapchat because they make it easy to share information and communicate with others.'

例: I am usually interested in social media apps like Instagram and Snapchat because they make it easy to share information and communicate with others quickly.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and grammatically incorrect. You should provide a full sentence and more details. For example, say 'I usually find out about new apps through recommendations from my friends, who suggest useful apps to download.'

例: I usually find out about new apps through recommendations from my friends, who suggest useful apps to download and try.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. You should specify the types of apps you want to use and explain why they would benefit your life. For example, say 'In the future, I would like to use educational apps because they can help me learn new skills and improve my knowledge.'

例: In the future, I would like to use educational apps because they can help me learn new skills and improve my knowledge.

× Well I am using a lot apps in my phone, Instagram, Snapchat, WhatsApp, Facebook. Eccetera.

✓ Well I am using a lot of apps on my phone, Instagram, Snapchat, WhatsApp, Facebook, etc.

The phrase 'a lot apps' is incorrect because 'a lot' should be followed by 'of' when referring to plural nouns. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' as apps are on the device. 'Eccetera' is better written as 'etc.' for abbreviation.

× Well, I'm using interesting inch in Instagram channel nap chat because it is easy to share some information to another person and it is easy to come. It is easy to communication with other an edge.

✓ Well, I usually use interesting Instagram and Snapchat channels because it is easy to share information with other people and it is easy to communicate with others.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'I'm using' is better as 'I usually use' to indicate habitual action. 'Interesting inch in Instagram channel nap chat' is unclear and corrected to 'interesting Instagram and Snapchat channels'. 'Share some information to another person' should be 'share information with other people'. 'Easy to come' is incorrect and removed. 'Easy to communication with other an edge' is corrected to 'easy to communicate with others'.

× Well my friend suggested mean to download and will apps.

✓ Well, my friend suggested me to download some apps.

The pronoun 'mean' is incorrect and should be 'me'. 'Will apps' is unclear and corrected to 'some apps'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use.

× I want to like those apps. Those are benefits in my. Life.

✓ I would like to use those apps. They are beneficial in my life.

'I want to like those apps' is incorrect; 'would like to use' is more appropriate for expressing desire. 'Those are benefits in my life' is grammatically incorrect; corrected to 'They are beneficial in my life' to properly express the idea.