App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is very short and lacks detail. Try to provide more information about the app and your experience with it, using linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Recently, I have been using Instagram a lot because it allows me to connect with friends and follow interesting content. For example, I enjoy browsing photos and videos related to travel and food.

提案: Avoid giving vague answers. Instead, try to think about your preferences and give a clear response with supporting details and examples.

例: I am usually interested in social media apps and entertainment apps because they help me relax and stay connected with others. For instance, I like using TikTok to watch short videos.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct answer and explain how you discover new apps, using linking words to connect your ideas.

例: I usually find out about new apps through social media platforms like Instagram or Facebook. Additionally, I often browse the App Store to see the latest popular apps.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks structure. Try to clearly state the types of apps you want to use and explain why, using linking words and specific details.

例: In the future, I would like to use apps like Instagram, TikTok, and Messenger because they help me stay connected with friends and enjoy entertaining content.

× I think I will use the app like Instagram or TikTok.

✓ I think I will use apps like Instagram or TikTok.

The phrase 'the app like Instagram or TikTok' is incorrect because 'app' is singular but refers to multiple examples. It should be plural 'apps' to match 'like Instagram or TikTok'. Also, 'like' is correctly used here to indicate examples.

× I don't or messenger.

✓ I don't use Messenger.

The sentence 'I don't or messenger.' is incomplete and lacks a verb. The correct sentence should include the verb 'use' to clarify the meaning: 'I don't use Messenger.'

× Yes I like these 3 apps.

✓ Yes, I like these three apps.

The number '3' should be written as a word 'three' in formal writing. Also, a comma is needed after 'Yes' to separate the introductory word from the main clause.