App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'English opera'가 정확히 어떤 앱인지 명확히 설명하고, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하세요. 예를 들어, 'I have recently used the English Opera app to improve my English skills because I spend a lot of time practicing with it.'처럼 말할 수 있습니다.

例: I have recently used the English Opera app to improve my English skills because I spend a lot of time practicing with it.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 관심 있는 앱 종류를 명확히 말하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 예를 들어, 'I am usually interested in educational apps like English Opera because I plan to study at a university in Australia, so I need to improve my English skills.'

例: I am usually interested in educational apps like English Opera because I plan to study at a university in Australia, so I need to improve my English skills.

提案: 답변이 반복적이고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 친구로부터 앱을 추천받았다는 점을 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하세요. 예를 들어, 'I found this app through a friend who recommended it to me, so I started using it.'

例: I found this app through a friend who recommended it to me, so I started using it.

提案: 문법과 표현이 부자연스럽습니다. 목표 점수를 명확히 하고, 앞으로 사용할 앱 종류를 구체적으로 말하세요. 예를 들어, 'I plan to continue using this app until I achieve a score of 7 in the IELTS exam.'

例: I plan to continue using this app until I achieve a score of 7 in the IELTS exam.

× I used English opera because I want to improve my English skill.

✓ I used English Opera because I wanted to improve my English skills.

The sentence mixes past tense 'used' with present tense 'want'. To maintain tense consistency, 'want' should be changed to past tense 'wanted'. Also, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' because English has multiple skills (reading, writing, speaking, listening).

× That's why I spend a lot of time for English opera.

✓ That's why I spend a lot of time on English Opera.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to indicate time spent on an activity is 'on'. Also, 'English opera' should be capitalized as 'English Opera' if it is a proper noun (app name).

× Knowledge I really interested about English opera because I'm planning to go to university in Australia, that's why I have to development of my English care.

✓ I am really interested in English Opera because I'm planning to go to university in Australia; that's why I have to develop my English skills.

The sentence has several issues: 'Knowledge' is misplaced and unnecessary; 'interested about' should be 'interested in'; 'have to development' is incorrect, should be 'have to develop'; 'English care' is incorrect, should be 'English skills'. Also, punctuation is needed to separate ideas clearly.

× I found this from my friend.

✓ I found this app from my friend.

The sentence is missing the object 'app' to clarify what was found. 'Found' is correct past tense here.

× My friend suggest suggest to me.

✓ My friend suggested it to me.

The verb 'suggest' should be in past tense 'suggested' to match the past context. Also, 'suggest to me' is incomplete; it should be 'suggested it to me' to include the object.

× That's why I found this separate that I'm using now.

✓ That's why I found this app that I'm using now.

The word 'separate' is incorrect here; likely the intended word is 'app'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs the correct noun to make sense.

× I think I keep going to using this app until when I get 7 Irish score.

✓ I think I will keep using this app until I get a 7 in the IELTS score.

The phrase 'keep going to using' is incorrect; it should be 'will keep using' for future continuous action. 'Until when' is incorrect; just 'until' is sufficient. '7 Irish score' is likely a mishearing of '7 IELTS score'. Also, 'a 7' is needed before the score.