App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は基本的な構造を満たしていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。また、最後の文が未完成で意味が伝わりにくいです。より具体的な例や理由を付け加え、文を完結させることが重要です。

例: I recently used Microsoft Teams, which is an essential tool for communication at my workplace. It helps us collaborate efficiently. However, sometimes it can be frustrating when notifications are too frequent.

提案: 回答は話の流れが不自然で、文法的な誤りや冗長な表現があります。具体的な理由や例を明確に述べ、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。

例: I'm very interested in dating apps because they have become popular worldwide. During the COVID-19 pandemic, these apps were an efficient way to meet potential partners despite social distancing.

提案: 文が途中で終わっており、意味が不明瞭です。文法の誤りもあります。回答を完結させ、具体的な理由や例を加えて、より自然で効果的な表現にすることが求められます。

例: I usually discover new apps by talking with my colleagues and friends. This method is efficient because it's hard to find good apps on my own, so their recommendations help me a lot.

提案: 多くの不要な間投詞があり、文が途中で終わっているため、内容が伝わりにくいです。回答は簡潔にし、具体的な理由や期待を述べることで、より効果的な表現になります。

例: In the future, I would like to use sports streaming apps that allow me to watch baseball and rugby games more conveniently. Currently, I watch on traditional TV, but these apps would offer more flexibility.

× I recently used the chatting apps named Microsoft Teams.

✓ I recently used the chatting app named Microsoft Teams.

'Apps' is plural, but 'Microsoft Teams' refers to a single app, so the singular form 'app' should be used.

× It is essential tool for our workplace to communicate with each other.

✓ It is an essential tool for our workplace to communicate with each other.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'an' before 'essential tool' because 'essential' starts with a vowel sound.

× I think it is very useful but makes me irritated when.

✓ I think it is very useful, but it makes me irritated sometimes.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject for 'makes me irritated' and a proper ending. Adding 'it' and 'sometimes' completes the thought.

× I'm very interested in matching apps.

✓ I'm very interested in matching apps.

No correction needed here as 'matching apps' is plural and correctly used.

× Umm, it has been spread all over the world.

✓ Umm, it has spread all over the world.

'Has been spread' is passive and awkward here; 'has spread' is the correct active present perfect form.

× When the COVID-19 pandemic has spread, it is a very efficient to make a very good person to marry.

✓ When the COVID-19 pandemic spread, it is very efficient to find a very good person to marry.

'A very efficient' is incorrect because 'efficient' is an adjective and needs a noun; also, 'make a very good person to marry' is awkward; 'find' is better. Also, 'has spread' changed to 'spread' for past event.

× I always find new apps by talking with my colleagues and friends.

✓ I always find new apps by talking to my colleagues and friends.

The correct preposition after 'talking' when indicating the person spoken to is 'to', not 'with'.

× so talking with other make me.

✓ so talking with others helps me.

'Other' should be plural 'others' and the verb 'make' should be 'helps' to agree with the subject and meaning.

× Now I watch the game by the hard TV, but I want to.

✓ Now I watch the game on the hard TV, but I want to.

'By the hard TV' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' for watching TV. Also, the sentence is incomplete but correction is limited to grammar.