Part 1
試験官
What apps have you recently used?
受験者
Well, to be honest, I used WeChat last day. It is important to me because I needed to communicate with my friend.
試験官
What kinds of apps are you usually interested in?
受験者
To be honest, I prefer to use creation apps. I can reduce my strength by using it.
試験官
How do you find out different apps?
受験者
To be honest, cheer. Sometimes my friends share with me some interesting apps, sometimes I find it online.
試験官
What kinds of apps would you like to use in the future?
受験者
To be honest, I think it's studying apps because I want to improve my ability of speaking and learning, so I think I would choose that.
What apps have you recently used?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“last day”应为“the other day”或“recently”。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并且补充更多细节使回答更丰富。
例: Recently, I used WeChat to chat with my friend because we needed to discuss our project. It is very convenient for staying in touch.
What kinds of apps are you usually interested in?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中表达不清晰,“reduce my strength”不符合语境,且缺乏具体细节。建议用更准确的词汇表达兴趣,并说明原因。
例: I usually enjoy using creative apps like drawing or music apps because they help me relax and express my ideas.
How do you find out different apps?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中出现无意义词汇“cheer”,影响表达清晰度。建议去除无关词汇,使用连词连接句子,并补充具体细节。
例: I usually discover new apps through my friends who recommend interesting ones, and sometimes I browse app stores online to find them.
What kinds of apps would you like to use in the future?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答表达重复且不够流畅,建议简化句子结构,避免重复“think”,并具体说明想用学习类应用的原因。
例: In the future, I would like to use educational apps to improve my speaking skills and overall learning efficiency.
× Well, to be honest, I used WeChat last day.
✓ Well, to be honest, I used WeChat yesterday.
“last day”不是地道的表达,应该用“yesterday”表示“昨天”,这是过去时间的正确表达方式。
× It is important to me because I needed to communicate with my friend.
✓ It is important to me because I need to communicate with my friend.
前半句用现在时态,后半句用过去时态不一致。这里表达的是一般事实,应该用现在时态“need”。
× I prefer to use creation apps.
✓ I prefer to use creative apps.
“creation”是名词,形容词应为“creative”,用来修饰“apps”。
× I can reduce my strength by using it.
✓ I can reduce my effort by using them.
“apps”是复数,代词应为“them”;“strength”用在这里不合适,应该用“effort”表示“努力”。
× To be honest, cheer.
✓ To be honest, I cheer.
句子缺少主语,导致结构不完整,应补充主语“I”。
× Sometimes my friends share with me some interesting apps, sometimes I find it online.
✓ Sometimes my friends share with me some interesting apps, sometimes I find them online.
“apps”是复数,代词应为“them”,而不是“it”。
× I think it's studying apps because I want to improve my ability of speaking and learning, so I think I would choose that.
✓ I think they are study apps because I want to improve my speaking and learning abilities, so I think I would choose them.
“studying apps”应改为“study apps”;“ability of speaking and learning”表达不自然,应改为“speaking and learning abilities”;代词“that”应改为复数“them”对应“apps”。