App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，并避免重复。可以简洁明了地说明使用的应用及其目的。

例: I have recently used TikTok and an AI app called TalkFace to practice my speaking skills.

提案: 回答结构较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富细节描述。

例: I am usually interested in communication apps and short video apps. For instance, communication apps like WeChat help me stay connected with my friends and family, while short video apps provide entertainment and relaxation.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议注意主谓一致和代词使用，同时可以更具体地说明寻找应用的方式。

例: I usually discover new apps through recommendations from my friends and family. For example, my friends often suggest apps that offer coupons and discounts, which encourages me to try them.

提案: 回答中表达稍显重复，建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并具体说明想使用的学习应用类型。

例: In the future, I would like to use learning apps more often to enhance my academic performance and improve my speaking skills.

× I recently used TikTok and talk face on AI apps to learn to practice your speaking skills.

✓ I recently used TikTok and TalkFace, AI apps, to learn and practice my speaking skills.

动词后面接动名词形式时，应该保持一致性。原句中“talk face”应为专有名词“TalkFace”，且“to learn to practice”结构不自然，改为“to learn and practice”更符合英语表达习惯。

× I am interested in communicating apps and short video apps.

✓ I am interested in communication apps and short video apps.

形容词“communicating”用错，应使用名词“communication”来修饰“apps”。

× I usually search for different apps by the recommendation of my friends or families.

✓ I usually search for different apps based on the recommendations of my friends or family.

介词“by”用错，应该用“based on”表示“根据”。另外，“recommendation”应为复数“recommendations”，且“families”应为不可数名词“family”。

× my friends always knows what apps have more coupons and discounts so that she will recommend me to install it.

✓ My friends always know which apps have more coupons and discounts, so they recommend that I install them.

主语“friends”为复数，谓语动词应为“know”而非“knows”。代词“she”与“friends”复数不符，应改为“they”。“recommend me to install it”表达不自然，改为“recommend that I install them”。

× I hope I would like to use the learning apps more frequently to improve my academic performance and improve my speaking language skills.

✓ I hope to use learning apps more frequently to improve my academic performance and speaking skills.

“hope”后不应接“would like to”，直接用不定式“to use”更合适。重复使用“improve”可省略一次，且“speaking language skills”表达冗余，简化为“speaking skills”。