App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более связным и естественным. Избегайте повторений и неполных предложений. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и добавьте конкретные детали.

例: Recently, I have used WhatsApp, Instagram, and TikTok. I mainly use WhatsApp to chat with my close friends and ask how they are doing.

提案: Используйте правильные грамматические конструкции и избегайте повторов. Начинайте с чёткой темы, затем добавляйте детали с помощью связующих слов.

例: I am usually interested in communication apps like WhatsApp because they allow me to stay in touch with my close friends and check on their well-being.

提案: Сделайте ответ более структурированным и логичным, используя связующие слова. Уточните детали и избегайте грамматических ошибок.

例: I usually find out about different apps through recommendations from my close friends. For example, TikTok is one app that I started using after a friend's suggestion.

提案: Ответ должен быть полным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте повторов и неполных предложений. Добавьте конкретные детали и используйте связующие слова.

例: In the future, I would like to use health and fitness apps that help me stay healthy and monitor my physical condition effectively.

× Recently I used WhatsApp, Instagram and TikTok.

✓ Recently, I have used WhatsApp, Instagram, and TikTok.

The sentence refers to recent activities, so the present perfect tense ('have used') is more appropriate than the simple past tense ('used'). This tense indicates actions that happened at an unspecified time before now and are relevant to the present.

× WhatsApp I used.

✓ I used WhatsApp.

The original sentence has an incorrect word order. The subject should come before the verb and object in English declarative sentences. Correct word order improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× To to ask how.

✓ To ask how they are.

The phrase is incomplete and contains a repeated word 'to'. It should be completed to express the intended meaning clearly. Adding 'they are' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× I usually interested in WhatsApp because I chat with my close friends and uh, ask how they are.

✓ I am usually interested in WhatsApp because I chat with my close friends and ask how they are.

The verb 'interested' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present simple tense in the passive form. Without 'am', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× That's why it is the one app that I interested in.

✓ That's why it is the one app that I am interested in.

The verb 'interested' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present simple tense passive voice. Omitting 'am' results in incorrect grammar.

× they usually recommend me

✓ they usually recommend to me

The verb 'recommend' is typically followed by 'to' when indicating the person receiving the recommendation. Omitting 'to' is incorrect in this context.

× and the one app that I usually use is Tiktok.

✓ and the one app that I usually use is TikTok.

The sentence is mostly correct but the brand name 'TikTok' should be capitalized properly. Also, no structural error is present here.

× In the future I would like to use health and fit apps that that helps me to stay healthy and fit my body.

✓ In the future, I would like to use health and fitness apps that help me to stay healthy and keep my body fit.

The modal verb 'would like' is used correctly, but 'that helps' should be 'that help' to agree with the plural noun 'apps'. Also, 'fit my body' is awkward; 'keep my body fit' is more natural.

× Also check my my level of.

✓ Also, check my fitness level.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains a repeated word 'my'. Completing the sentence with 'fitness level' clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.