App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并直接回答问题，同时避免语法错误。

例: I often use apps that help me find new stores and restaurants with good reviews in my country. I also use Google Maps to navigate around.

提案: 回答内容重复且不够具体，表达不流畅，建议使用更准确的词汇并提供具体例子。

例: I usually like apps that provide the latest information about new shops and restaurants in my country, especially those offering creative dishes.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词并改进语法，使表达更自然。

例: Sometimes my friends recommend useful apps for work or study. Also, app stores often update and suggest highly rated apps.

提案: 表达不够清晰，句子结构复杂且有语法错误，建议简化句子并明确表达未来想使用的应用类型。

例: In the future, I would like to use AI-powered apps that can understand my mood and help me solve problems.

× The most too frequent apps I use are in my country where I can see any new stores or restaurants with good reviews and others is Google Maps where I can use.

✓ The most frequent apps I use in my country are those where I can see new stores or restaurants with good reviews, and another is Google Maps which I use.

句中“apps”是复数，但后面“others is Google Maps”中“others”应为单数形式“another”，且“too”多余。应调整为“another is Google Maps”。此外，“any new stores”用法不当，应去掉“any”。

× Sometimes my friends recommend me which app is useful for them when work or study.

✓ Sometimes my friends recommend to me which app is useful for them when they work or study.

动词recommend后应接介词to引出间接宾语，且“when work or study”缺少主语，应补充“they”。

× Other times apps will update and recommend some apps which is in good rating.

✓ Other times, apps will update and recommend some apps which have good ratings.

“which is in good rating”中“which”指代复数“apps”，谓语应用复数“have”，且“in good rating”表达不自然，应改为“have good ratings”。

× Maybe in the future I will have chance to use apps, the code in artificial intelligence, where I can contact with it and share my mood and solve problems together.

✓ Maybe in the future I will have a chance to use apps coded with artificial intelligence, where I can contact it, share my mood, and solve problems together.

“have chance”缺少冠词“a”，且“contact with it”中“contact”是及物动词，不需要介词“with”。此外，“the code in artificial intelligence”表达不清，应改为“apps coded with artificial intelligence”。