App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more fluent and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, structure your answer clearly by stating the type of apps first, then explain why you use them, using linking words for coherence.

例: I often use educational apps because I am preparing for my university entrance exam. Therefore, I spend a lot of time studying with these apps to improve my knowledge.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use complete sentences and linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'are slight'. Be specific about the types of apps and why you like them.

例: I am usually interested in both educational and entertainment apps. For example, I use TikTok and YouTube to watch videos and play games during my free time because they help me relax.

提案: Improve sentence structure and avoid filler words. Use correct verb forms and clarify your meaning. For example, say 'My phone sometimes recommends apps to me' and explain how you get recommendations from others.

例: My phone sometimes recommends apps to me based on my interests. Additionally, I ask my friends and family for suggestions when I want to try new apps.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to directly answer the question by stating the types of apps you want to use in the future and why. Use complete sentences and avoid filler words.

例: In the future, I would like to use more advanced educational apps that can help me learn new skills efficiently, as technology continues to develop.

× I would say I use often educational apps because, uh, as a woman, I am a student trying to pass my entrance exam for university, uh, so I spend a lot of time on the, on these apps.

✓ I would say I often use educational apps because, uh, as a woman, I am a student trying to pass my entrance exam for university, uh, so I spend a lot of time on these apps.

The adverb 'often' should be placed before the main verb 'use' in the present tense sentence to follow correct English word order. The phrase 'use often' is incorrect; it should be 'often use'.

× I would say both educational and entertaining are slight. TikTok and YouTube to spend my free time watching videos and playing games.

✓ I would say both educational and entertaining apps are my favorites. I use TikTok and YouTube to spend my free time watching videos and playing games.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb, causing confusion. 'Both educational and entertaining are slight' is incorrect; it should specify 'apps' and use a verb like 'are'. Also, the sentence about TikTok and YouTube needs a subject and verb to be complete. This correction fixes the singular/plural issue and sentence structure.

× My phone sometimes recommend these apps for me and sometimes I ask my friend and family for uh, specific uh, uh, interview on them.

✓ My phone sometimes recommends these apps to me, and sometimes I ask my friends and family for specific information about them.

The verb 'recommend' should be 'recommends' to agree with the singular subject 'phone' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'family'. The phrase 'interview on them' is incorrect; 'information about them' is more appropriate. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I think I've developed, uh, each day, so I think there will be different kind of apps in the future. Umm, hopefully I'm using.

✓ I think apps have developed each day, so I think there will be different kinds of apps in the future. Umm, hopefully I will be using them.

The phrase 'I've developed' is unclear and incorrect here; it should be 'apps have developed' to indicate ongoing development. 'Different kind' should be pluralized to 'different kinds' to match plural 'apps'. The phrase 'hopefully I'm using' is incomplete and should be 'hopefully I will be using them' to express future intention properly.