App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“In recently”应为“Recently”，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，且注意时态和冠词的使用。

例: Recently, I have used entertainment and chatting apps like TikTok, Netflix, WeChat, and WhatsApp to relax and stay in touch with my friends and family.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“will addicted”应为“am addicted to”，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达兴趣原因，并避免重复。

例: I am usually interested in entertainment apps like Netflix, Disney Plus, and TikTok because I enjoy watching shows that help me relax and keep me connected with my family and friends.

提案: 回答中表达不够连贯，存在语法错误，如“found”应为“find”，且句子较长且缺少连接词。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意时态一致。

例: I usually find new apps on the Internet by reading user reviews. Then, I choose the best one to download from app stores like Google Play or the Apple Store.

提案: 回答内容重复且表达不够清晰，句子结构简单且缺少具体细节。建议明确表达未来使用的应用类型，并提供理由或预测。

例: In the future, I would like to continue using similar apps as now, such as entertainment and communication apps, because technology has improved a lot and I expect these apps to become even more user-friendly and engaging.

× In recently, I used the entertainment and the chatting apps such as Tiktok, Netflix and WeChat or WhatsApp.

✓ Recently, I used entertainment and chatting apps such as TikTok, Netflix, WeChat, or WhatsApp.

“In recently” 是错误的介词搭配，正确用法是直接使用副词“Recently”表示“最近”。此外，“the entertainment and the chatting apps”中不需要定冠词“the”，因为这里泛指应用程序。

× Yeah, because I was using that to spend my time.

✓ Yeah, because I used them to spend my time.

“was using that”中的“that”指代不明确，且时态不符合语境，应该用一般过去时“used”，并且“that”应改为复数“them”指代多个应用。

× Most likely I will addicted to some entertainment apps like Netflix or Disney plus or Tiktok because I really love to watch the drum shows and that can make me feel relaxed and stay connected with my family or friends because I.

✓ Most likely I will be addicted to some entertainment apps like Netflix, Disney Plus, or TikTok because I really love to watch drum shows, and they can make me feel relaxed and stay connected with my family and friends.

“will addicted”缺少助动词“be”，正确结构是“will be addicted”。“or”连接多个选项时应使用逗号分隔，且“that”指代不明确，应改为复数“they”。句尾“because I.”不完整，应删除。

× I just found on the Internet because most likely there will be a lot of comments on it and then I can choose the best one to download it in my smartphone and also I will open the App Store like Google Play or Apple store.

✓ I just find apps on the Internet because there are usually a lot of comments on them, and then I can choose the best one to download to my smartphone. Also, I open app stores like Google Play or Apple Store.

“found”时态不符合语境，应使用一般现在时“find”。“download it in my smartphone”中“in”用法错误，正确介词是“to”。“App Store”应大写且复数形式“app stores”更合适。

× I think it's still the same as now because I think I will not really change too much on it.

✓ I think it will still be the same as now because I don't think I will really change much about it.

“I think it's still the same as now”时态不一致，谈论未来应使用将来时“will still be”。“change too much on it”中介词“on”用法错误，应为“about”。

× And also most likely for now technology is already improved.

✓ And also, technology has already improved now.

“technology is already improved”被动语态不合适，应该用现在完成时“has already improved”表示技术已经进步。

× I think it may be also similar in the future.

✓ I think it may also be similar in the future.

“may be also”副词位置不正确，副词“also”应放在情态动词“may”之后。