App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like "umm" and try to use more precise vocabulary. Also, instead of "understand what my friends are doing currently," you could say "keep up with my friends' activities."

例: I use many apps daily, but my favorite is Instagram because it helps me keep up with my friends' activities.

提案: Try to improve grammar and sentence structure. Instead of "I usually interest in," say "I am usually interested in." Also, avoid repetition like "allow us allow me." Use linking words to make your answer smoother.

例: Since I am an extrovert, I am usually interested in social apps such as Instagram, WhatsApp, Snapchat, and Facebook because they allow me to connect with people easily.

提案: Your answer is quite detailed but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words like "so" and correct phrases such as "when there is a release of" to "when new apps are released."

例: I usually find out about new apps through conversations with my friends. When new and interesting apps are released, they often mention them, so I download and try them to keep up with the trend.

提案: Avoid filler words like "umm" and improve sentence flow. Use plural form "AI apps are" and connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about how AI apps can help you.

例: AI apps are very popular nowadays, so in the future, I would like to use more of them, such as language-learning AI chatbots, to improve my skills in English, Korean, and Japanese, which I am currently studying.

× I use a lot of apps everyday, for example umm my favorite one is Instagram because it allows me to understand what my friends are doing currently.

✓ I have used a lot of apps recently, for example, my favorite one is Instagram because it allows me to understand what my friends are doing currently.

The question asks about apps recently used, so the present perfect tense 'have used' is more appropriate than simple present 'use' to indicate recent actions. Also, 'everyday' should be 'every day' if used, but here 'recently' fits better.

× Because I am an extrovert so I usually interest in some socializing app, for example Instagram, WhatsApp, Snapchat, Facebook because they allow us allow me to connect with people.

✓ Because I am an extrovert, I am usually interested in some socializing apps, for example Instagram, WhatsApp, Snapchat, and Facebook because they allow me to connect with people.

The phrase 'interest in' is incorrect; the correct form is 'interested in'. Also, 'so' after 'because' is redundant. 'Allow us allow me' is a repetition; 'allow me' is correct. 'App' should be plural 'apps' to match 'some'.

× Mainly from the discussions with friends, because when there is release of some interesting new apps, my friends will talk during our conversation and then I will try to download it and play it so that I can catch up with the trend.

✓ Mainly from discussions with friends, because when there is a release of some interesting new apps, my friends talk during our conversations and then I try to download and use them so that I can catch up with the trend.

The phrase 'there is release' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'will talk' and 'will try' are better as simple present 'talk' and 'try' to describe habitual actions. 'Play it' is better as 'use them' because apps are used, not played, and 'it' should be plural 'them' to match 'apps'.

× AI are very popular nowadays, so I would like to use more AI apps in the future.

✓ AI is very popular nowadays, so I would like to use more AI apps in the future.

'AI' is treated as a singular noun (Artificial Intelligence), so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'.

× For example, umm talking with AI to improve my language not only in English but also in other languages such as Korean and Japanese because I'm currently learning these two languages.

✓ For example, talking with AI to improve my language skills not only in English but also in other languages such as Korean and Japanese because I'm currently learning these two languages.

The phrase 'improve my language' is incomplete; it should be 'improve my language skills' to be grammatically correct and clear.