App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“the WeChat”应为“WeChat”，以及“you can make friends with”表达不完整。建议注意冠词使用，避免多余词汇，句子结构应更完整自然。

例: Recently, I have been using WeChat frequently to communicate with my boss and friends. I use it daily for both work and personal life because it is very convenient for socializing and making new friends.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，句子不完整且缺乏具体细节。建议练习构建完整句子，明确表达兴趣的应用类型，并提供具体例子。

例: To be honest, I am most interested in mobile games. For example, I enjoy playing a popular Chinese game on my phone that many people can play together.

提案: 回答语法和表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议使用连词连接句子，明确表达寻找应用的方法，并举例说明。

例: I usually find new apps by searching on websites. There are many recommendations online, so I can choose the best ones to try.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“a app”应为“an app”，表达不够自然且用词不当，如“without any disturbing”和“very fashion”。建议注意冠词使用，选择合适词汇表达想法，并使句子更流畅。

例: I would like to use an app that allows me to connect with people worldwide without interruptions. It would be great to make new friends through such a convenient platform.

× Well, recently I always use the WeChat to communicate with my boss and my friends.

✓ Well, recently I have always used WeChat to communicate with my boss and my friends.

这里谈论的是最近一段时间内经常发生的动作，应该使用现在完成时态，表示动作从过去持续到现在。原句使用一般现在时不符合语境。

× Well, recently I always use the WeChat to communicate with my boss and my friends.

✓ Well, recently I have always used WeChat to communicate with my boss and my friends.

WeChat是专有名词，前面不需要加定冠词“the”。

× It is very convenient to socialize with others and you can make friends with.

✓ It is very convenient to socialize with others and you can make friends.

动词短语“make friends”后不需要加介词“with”，加上会造成语法错误。

× Well, to be honest, my the most interesting As for me is the game it's about.

✓ Well, to be honest, the most interesting app for me is the game.

原句中“my the most interesting As”结构混乱，且“As”应为“app”，需要调整词序和词形使句子通顺。

× Well, to be honest, my the most interesting As for me is the game it's about.

✓ Well, to be honest, the most interesting app for me is the game.

“As for me”用法不当，应该用“for me”表示“对我来说”。

× It's a Chinese game in the phone and everyone can play it.

✓ It's a Chinese game on the phone and everyone can play it.

“in the phone”应改为“on the phone”，表示在手机上。

× Well I would say that the way I find the apps is various.

✓ Well, I would say that the ways I find apps are various.

“the way”单数与“various”复数形容词不匹配，应改为复数“ways”，且“apps”复数更合适。

× There's so many recommend that I can accept to find the most.

✓ There are so many recommendations that I can accept to find the best.

“There's”是“there is”的缩写，后面接复数名词应使用“there are”。“recommend”应为名词“recommendations”。“find the most”不完整，改为“find the best”。

× Oh, I've never thought about this question, but I would say that I want to use a app that can connect with anyone in the world without any disturbing and I can use it to make new friends.

✓ Oh, I've never thought about this question, but I would say that I want to use an app that can connect with anyone in the world without any disturbance and I can use it to make new friends.

“a app”前应使用“an”因为“app”发音以元音音素开头。“disturbing”用作名词不合适，应改为名词“disturbance”。

× To be honest, I think it is a very fashion.

✓ To be honest, I think it is very fashionable.

“fashion”是名词，形容词应为“fashionable”，表示“时尚的”。