App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但缺少更具体的细节和连贯的连接词。建议在回答中加入更多具体例子，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Recently, I have been using my laptop mainly for work and study. For example, I often use social media apps like Instagram to keep in touch with my friends, and news apps such as BBC News to stay updated on current events. These apps help me stay connected and informed efficiently.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，且内容不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达兴趣的应用类型，并补充具体原因。

例: I am usually interested in English speaking apps because they help me practice speaking skills online. For example, these apps save time and money compared to face-to-face lessons, which is very helpful for students preparing for exams.

提案: 回答内容重复前一问题，缺少对“如何发现应用”的具体说明。建议直接回答问题，说明发现应用的途径，并用连接词丰富内容。

例: I usually find new apps by reading online reviews and recommendations from friends. For instance, I discovered an English speaking app through a blog that praised its convenience and effectiveness, which motivated me to try it.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法混乱，且未明确说明应用类型。建议简化表达，明确说明想使用的应用及原因，并使用连贯的句子。

例: In the future, I would like to use apps like Duolingo because they are easy to use and free. These apps allow me to practice language skills by answering questions and receiving instant feedback, which helps me learn effectively.

× Yeah, as As for me, the air speaking apps with quite useful for me which can improve my English speaking levels online instead of talking with people.

✓ Yeah, as for me, the English speaking apps are quite useful for me as they can improve my English speaking skills online instead of talking with people.

句中“air speaking apps”应为“English speaking apps”，且缺少系动词“are”，形容词“quite useful”前应有系动词。需要使用正确的形容词和完整的句子结构。

× It's same time and money and it's good for people to pursue a high school exam.

✓ It saves time and money, and it's good for people preparing for high school exams.

原句中“It's same time and money”表达不清，应使用“saves time and money”表示节省时间和金钱。连接词“and”使用正确，但句子结构需调整使表达更自然。

× These apps help me to improve my speaking levels without talking to people face to face.

✓ These apps help me improve my speaking skills without talking to people face to face.

“help me to improve”中的“to”可以省略，更地道的表达是“help me improve”。“speaking levels”应改为“speaking skills”，更符合英语习惯。

× Maybe such as deep, deep sick and I will use it in the future because it's quite easy to do that.

✓ Maybe apps such as DeepL, and I will use it in the future because it's quite easy to use.

“deep, deep sick”应为“DeepL”等具体应用名称，且句子缺少主语和谓语的清晰表达。应明确指出“apps such as DeepL”，并使用正确的动词短语“easy to use”。

× I can give answer and they give, I can, I can give a question and they can give answer and it's free to assess.

✓ I can give an answer and they can give one; I can ask a question and they can answer, and it's free to access.

缺少冠词“an”修饰“answer”，且“give answer”应为“give one”或“answer”。“free to assess”应为“free to access”，意思是免费使用。句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。