App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“the many apps”和“connected with connected my friend”。建议加强语法基础，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的句式。

例: Recently, I have used many apps, but the one I use most frequently is social media apps like WeChat and TikTok because I often use WeChat to connect with my friends.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且有重复和不完整的句子。建议练习完整句子表达，避免重复，并丰富细节。

例: I usually enjoy social media apps like TikTok and Instagram because I use them to watch short videos and stay updated with trends.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和表达不准确的问题，句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

例: Generally, I find new apps by searching in the App Store when I want to download different kinds of applications.

提案: 回答未完成且表达重复，缺乏具体细节。建议完整表达观点，避免重复，并提供更多具体功能的描述。

例: In the future, I would like to use multifunctional apps like WeChat because they allow me to connect with friends and family, make payments, and perform many other tasks conveniently.

× Well recently I used the many apps but the most frequent 1 is the social media like WeChat or Tiktok because I always use the WeChat to connected with connected my friend.

✓ Well recently I used many apps but the most frequent one is social media like WeChat or TikTok because I always use WeChat to connect with my friends.

“the many apps”中“the”不应与“many”连用，且“1”应写为“one”；“the social media”中“social media”是复数名词，不用加“the”；“connected with connected my friend”中“connected”用错，应为动词原形“connect”，且“friend”应为复数“friends”。

× Well recently I used the many apps but the most frequent 1 is the social media like WeChat or Tiktok because I always use the WeChat to connected with connected my friend.

✓ Well recently I used many apps but the most frequent one is social media like WeChat or TikTok because I always use WeChat to connect with my friends.

“connected”在这里错误地用作过去分词，正确用法是动词原形“connect”，因为“use ... to do”结构后应接动词原形。

× Well I always enjoying the social media like TikTok or Instagram because I always use it to watch short video or watch some. In my show few times few times.

✓ Well I always enjoy social media like TikTok or Instagram because I always use it to watch short videos. I watch them a few times in my show.

“always enjoying”应为“always enjoy”，因为“always”后接动词原形表示习惯动作；“short video”应为复数“short videos”；句子结构不完整，需补充完整表达。

× Well recently I used the many apps but the most frequent 1 is the social media like WeChat or Tiktok because I always use the WeChat to connected with connected my friend.

✓ Well recently I used many apps but the most frequent one is social media like WeChat or TikTok because I always use WeChat to connect with my friends.

“connected with connected my friend”中“with”是正确的介词，但“connected”用错，应为动词原形“connect”，且“friend”应为复数“friends”。

× Well I always enjoying the social media like TikTok or Instagram because I always use it to watch short video or watch some. In my show few times few times.

✓ Well I always enjoy social media like TikTok or Instagram because I always use it to watch short videos. I watch them a few times in my show.

“short video”应为复数形式“short videos”，因为表示多个短视频。

× Well, generally I always find out the steps in the app stores because if I want to download some different kind of kind of apps, I will search this app in the App Store.

✓ Well, generally I always find apps in the app stores because if I want to download different kinds of apps, I will search for this app in the App Store.

“find out the steps in the app stores”表达不准确，应为“find apps in the app stores”；“search this app”应为“search for this app”，动词“search”后需加介词“for”。

× Well, generally I always find out the steps in the app stores because if I want to download some different kind of kind of apps, I will search this app in the App Store.

✓ Well, generally I always find apps in the app stores because if I want to download different kinds of apps, I will search for this app in the App Store.

“some different kind of kind of apps”中“kind”重复且“kind”应为复数“kinds”，因为修饰复数“apps”。

× Well definitely I would like to use multi function apps like the WeChat. I can use WeChat to connect my friends, my family or I can use the WeChat to pay for something and also I can use the WeChat to.

✓ Well definitely I would like to use multifunction apps like WeChat. I can use WeChat to connect with my friends and my family, or I can use WeChat to pay for something, and also I can use WeChat to...

“multi function”应写为“multifunction”；“connect my friends”应为“connect with my friends”，动词“connect”后需加介词“with”；句子末尾不完整，需补充完整。