App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm cũng như ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh để thể hiện ý một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

例: Recently, I have used apps like TikTok, Facebook, Hello Messenger, and an English speaking app to improve my language skills.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lỗi sai như 'at app'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

例: I am usually interested in educational and productivity apps because they help me learn new skills and manage my time more effectively.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và logic.

例: I usually find out about different apps through recommendations from my friends and family, who often suggest useful or entertaining apps they have discovered.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và từ vựng phù hợp. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'do education app' và 'talks on'.

例: In the future, I would like to use educational apps focused on language learning and skill development.

× I have a tick tock Facebook, Hello messenger and and and I'll speaking.

✓ I have TikTok, Facebook, Hello Messenger, and I'll Speaking.

The original sentence incorrectly lists app names without proper capitalization and punctuation, and 'I'll speaking' is unclear. Correct app names should be capitalized and separated by commas. 'I'll speaking' seems to be a misstatement and is corrected to 'I'll Speaking' assuming it's an app name. This improves clarity and correctness.

× I am usually interested in educational and productivity at app because they help me learn new skills and manage my time if I see anything.

✓ I am usually interested in educational and productivity apps because they help me learn new skills and manage my time.

The phrase 'productivity at app' is incorrect; it should be 'productivity apps' to correctly use the plural noun with adjectives. Also, 'if I see anything' is unnecessary and confusing, so it is removed for clarity.

× I usually find out about different actual recommendations from friends and family as they often say you food or entertaining if they haven't discovered.

✓ I usually find out about different apps through recommendations from friends and family, as they often suggest useful or entertaining ones if they have discovered them.

The original sentence misuses 'actual recommendations' and 'say you food or entertaining' which is unclear. 'Through recommendations' is the correct prepositional phrase. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In the future I would like to do education app that talks on language learning and skill development.

✓ In the future, I would like to use an educational app that focuses on language learning and skill development.

The phrase 'do education app' is incorrect; it should be 'use an educational app'. Also, 'talks on' is better expressed as 'focuses on'. The article 'an' is added before 'educational app' to correct article usage.