App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'shopping' and 'app' unnecessarily. Also, use correct grammar and sentence structure.

例: Recently, I have been using the Amazon app for online shopping because it is very popular and convenient in my country. It offers a wide range of products and reliable delivery services, which makes shopping easier for me.

提案: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, improve grammar and avoid repetition. For example, instead of 'different type of app', say 'various apps'.

例: I am usually interested in educational apps that help me with my studies. For instance, I use the Lip Scholar app, which is very beneficial because it provides scholarships and study materials for students like me.

提案: Make your answer more natural and coherent by using linking words and avoiding repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific details. Also, use correct grammar and sentence structure.

例: I usually find out about new apps through advertisements. For example, I read newspapers daily, and they often feature ads that introduce different useful apps.

提案: Provide a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'motor app' and clarify your ideas. Also, improve grammar and sentence structure for better clarity.

例: In the future, I would like to use apps related to transportation that can save time and reduce costs. For instance, I have heard about an AI-based app launched in America that helps individuals manage their travel efficiently.

× According to my daily routine life I use different type of app but recently I use the app which is helpful in shopping named as Amazon.

✓ According to my daily routine life I use different types of apps but recently I used the app which is helpful in shopping named Amazon.

The phrase 'different type of app' should be pluralized to 'different types of apps' because it refers to more than one app. Also, 'recently I use' should be 'recently I used' to correctly indicate past action. 'Named as Amazon' should be 'named Amazon' because 'named' does not require 'as'.

× According to my daily routine life I use different type of app but recently I use the app which is helpful in shopping named as Amazon.

✓ According to my daily routine life I use different types of apps but recently I used the app which is helpful in shopping named Amazon.

The action 'recently I use' refers to a past event, so the verb should be in past tense 'used' to maintain correct tense usage.

× This app is very popular in my country for online shopping and also we can say that it is helpful in eshopping.

✓ This app is very popular in my country for online shopping and also we can say that it is helpful in e-shopping.

The word 'eshopping' should be hyphenated as 'e-shopping' to correctly represent the term for electronic shopping.

× According to my interest, I use different type of app on daily basis which is very helpful in my study.

✓ According to my interest, I use different types of apps on a daily basis which are very helpful in my study.

'Different type of app' should be pluralized to 'different types of apps' because it refers to multiple apps. Also, 'on daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis' for correct idiomatic expression. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'apps'.

× For example, I am a student and I use different type of app such as Lip Scholar is very beneficial app for student and provides scholarship to student.

✓ For example, I am a student and I use different types of apps such as Lip Scholar, which is a very beneficial app for students and provides scholarships to students.

'Different type of app' should be 'different types of apps' to indicate plural. 'Such as Lip Scholar is very beneficial app' needs a comma and 'which is a very beneficial app' for clarity. 'Student' should be plural 'students' as it refers to multiple people. 'Scholarship' should be plural 'scholarships' to match context.

× It is very easy to find different type of app.

✓ It is very easy to find different types of apps.

'Different type of app' should be pluralized to 'different types of apps' because it refers to multiple apps.

× But I found a different type of app through advertisement.

✓ But I found a different type of app through advertisements.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' as it generally refers to multiple ads. The past tense 'found' is correct here.

× I read newspaper on daily basis and through the newspaper I know about a different type of app.

✓ I read the newspaper on a daily basis and through the newspaper I learn about different types of apps.

'Read newspaper' should be 'read the newspaper' because 'newspaper' is a countable noun requiring an article. 'On daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis' for correct idiomatic usage. 'I know about' should be 'I learn about' to better express acquiring new information. 'A different type of app' should be pluralized to 'different types of apps'.

× In the future I like to use the motor app which saves my time and cost and according to the research one app is launched by America name as AI.

✓ In the future I would like to use the motor app which saves my time and cost, and according to research, one app has been launched by America named AI.

'I like to use' should be 'I would like to use' to express future intention politely. 'According to the research' should be 'according to research' for natural phrasing. 'One app is launched' should be 'one app has been launched' to correctly use present perfect tense for recent events. 'Name as AI' should be 'named AI'.

× It is a very successful app and save a lot of time of individual.

✓ It is a very successful app and saves a lot of time for individuals.

The verb 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'app' (third person singular). 'Of individual' should be 'for individuals' to correctly express benefit to people in plural form.