App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“songs serve as a study or work like the WPS”表达不准确，且句子结构不够自然。建议加强语法基础，避免表达模糊，使用更准确的词汇和句式。

例: I have recently used various apps. For example, I use games and social media apps for entertainment. Additionally, I use productivity apps like WPS Office to help with my study and work.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“which is which is called”和“It's significantly improve”应改为“which is called”和“it significantly improves”。建议注意句子结构和时态的正确使用，使表达更流畅自然。

例: I am usually interested in apps that help me study and improve my work efficiency. For instance, last month my best friend recommended a study app called Talk Phase, which has significantly improved my learning and English speaking skills.

提案: 回答中“social media ports”应为“social media platforms”，表达更准确。建议注意词汇的准确性，并尝试使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually discover different apps on social media platforms, where many celebrities and influencers recommend effective and interesting apps. Additionally, my friends sometimes suggest apps to me.

提案: 回答中“competitivity”应为“competitiveness”，“apps that focused”应为“apps that focus”。建议注意词汇拼写和时态一致性，同时使表达更自然流畅。

例: In the future, I would like to use productivity apps because improving my competitiveness is very important for my personal growth. For example, I am interested in apps that focus on improving English speaking skills.

× some apps serve as entertainment like games and some social media platforms.

✓ some apps serve as entertainment, like games and some social media platforms.

在“entertainment”和“like”之间需要逗号来分隔，表示举例。缺少逗号会导致句子结构不清晰。

× songs serve as a study or work like the WPS.

✓ some apps serve for study or work, like WPS.

原句中“songs”应为“some apps”，且“serve as a study or work”表达不正确，应使用“serve for study or work”表示用途。

× last month my best friend recommended a study app for me which is which is called the Talk Phase.

✓ last month my best friend recommended a study app for me, which is called Talk Phase.

“which is which is”重复，应去掉一个“which is”，且“the Talk Phase”中“the”不必要。

× It's significantly improve my learning and English speaking.

✓ It significantly improves my learning and English speaking.

“It's”是“it is”的缩写，后面应接动词的第三人称单数形式“improves”，而不是动词原形“improve”。

× It's significantly improve my learning and English speaking.

✓ It significantly improves my learning and English speaking.

主语是第三人称单数“it”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“improves”。

× I usually find out different apps on the social media ports, where many famous celebrities or influencers will recommend some effective and interesting apps.

✓ I usually find different apps on social media platforms, where many famous celebrities or influencers recommend some effective and interesting apps.

“find out”通常用于发现事实或信息，找应用应使用“find”。“social media ports”应为“social media platforms”。“will recommend”改为一般现在时“recommend”，因为这是习惯行为。

× sometimes my friend will recommend some apps for me.

✓ sometimes my friend recommends some apps to me.

“will”表示将来时，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时“recommends”。“recommend some apps to me”更符合英语习惯表达。

× Well, I will use some productivity apps in the future because improving my competitivity is most important and crucial thing for my personal growth.

✓ Well, I will use some productivity apps in the future because improving my competitiveness is the most important and crucial thing for my personal growth.

“competitivity”应为“competitiveness”。“most important and crucial thing”前应加定冠词“the”。

× I'm interested in apps that focused on improving English speaking.

✓ I'm interested in apps that focus on improving English speaking.

定语从句中谓语动词应与先行词时态一致，使用一般现在时“focus”，而非过去式“focused”。