App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ภาษาอังกฤษที่เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ เช่น คำว่า "video video" นอกจากนี้ควรจัดระเบียบประโยคให้ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้เนื้อหาดูสมเหตุสมผลมากขึ้น

例: I recently used TikTok, a popular app from China that offers a variety of short videos. It is very famous because it provides diverse content that appeals to many users.

提案: ควรตอบคำถามโดยตรงและใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้คำว่า "I am interested in" แทน "I'm interesting" และควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหลมากขึ้น

例: I am usually interested in apps that help me focus on studying, such as timers or reading apps that track my study time and offer rewards as motivation.

提案: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ เช่น "I I've mostly I will" ควรแก้ไขเป็น "I usually find out about apps through suggestions" และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์

例: I usually find out about different apps through suggestions from YouTubers, bloggers, and even my friends who recommend useful apps for studying or daily life.

提案: คำตอบควรชัดเจนและสมบูรณ์มากขึ้น ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดติดขัดและใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด

例: In the future, I would like to use apps that help with reviewing study materials, such as those that provide useful tips and tricks to improve learning.

× I recently used TikTok which is application from China and very famous now because Tiktok provides some short video video that variety in their contents.

✓ I recently used TikTok, which is an application from China and is very famous now because TikTok provides some short videos that vary in their content.

The sentence has incorrect adjective and noun usage: 'application' needs an article 'an'; 'video video' is repetitive and should be 'videos'; 'variety' should be 'vary' to correctly describe the verb action; 'contents' should be singular 'content' when referring to the material collectively.

× No, I'm interesting in app that help me focus more on study like some timer or the reading app that will count the time where you have start to study and it can be treat for some reward.

✓ No, I'm interested in apps that help me focus more on studying, like some timers or reading apps that will count the time when you start to study and can be treated as a reward.

The adjective 'interesting' is incorrectly used instead of the past participle adjective 'interested'; 'app' should be plural 'apps' to match the context; 'help me focus more on study' should be 'help me focus more on studying' to use the gerund form; 'some timer' should be 'some timers' for plural; 'where you have start' is incorrect, should be 'when you start'; 'can be treat' should be 'can be treated' to use the correct passive form.

× I I've mostly I will find in subject suggestion from Youtubers or bloggers and even my fans they will recommend me to use this app to help me improve study or use with my daily life.

✓ I mostly find suggestions about subjects from YouTubers or bloggers, and even my fans recommend me to use apps that help me improve my studies or use in my daily life.

The sentence has redundant and confusing structure: 'I I've mostly I will find' is incorrect and redundant; 'in subject suggestion' should be 'suggestions about subjects'; 'recommend me to use this app' should be 'recommend me to use apps'; 'improve study' should be 'improve my studies'; 'use with my daily life' should be 'use in my daily life'.

× I would like to try the application that's about help in review study like some. Some tips or a trick that can provide in this lesson?

✓ I would like to try an application that helps with reviewing studies, like some tips or tricks that can be provided in this lesson.

The sentence has modal verb and article issues: 'that's about help in review study' should be 'that helps with reviewing studies'; 'some. Some tips or a trick' is fragmented and should be combined; 'can provide' should be 'can be provided' to use passive voice correctly; 'a trick' should be plural 'tricks' to match 'some tips'.