App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且有重复词汇。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且使用正确的时态和语法，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Recently, I have been using ChatGPT to practice my speaking skills because I want to improve and have a virtual mentor to guide me.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，如'datas'应为'data'。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并且补充具体例子使内容更丰富。

例: I usually prefer apps related to artificial intelligence because they help me find useful data and studies to solve various problems efficiently.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇，且句子结构较简单。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并且提供更具体的例子来丰富内容。

例: I usually discover new apps through the App Store, but sometimes my friends recommend useful ones that help me manage many tasks effectively.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议避免重复，使用连接词，并且具体说明为什么信任这些应用。

例: In the future, I would like to use more artificial intelligence apps because they can make work more efficient and reliable by helping me gather accurate data.

× Well I'm using ChatGPT these days because I want to practice my speaking skill and I need I need a mentor.

✓ Well, I've been using ChatGPT these days because I want to practice my speaking skills and I need a mentor.

这里使用现在完成进行时（have been using）更符合“these days”表示的最近一段时间的持续动作。'speaking skill'应为复数'speaking skills'，因为说话能力通常包含多个方面。

× I tried GPT can help me with this as a teacher?

✓ I tried to see if GPT can help me with this as a teacher.

原句结构不完整，缺少连接词和不定式，导致句子不通顺。应使用不定式'to see'连接两个动作。

× It can it can help us to find more datas or studies to to help us deal with some problems.

✓ It can help us find more data or studies to help us deal with some problems.

'data'是不可数名词，不应加复数形式's'。此外，句中重复了'it can'和'to'，应删除多余部分。

× I usually find them in the App Store, but sometimes my friends will recommend some apps to me which which is really useful and can help me handle a lot of things.

✓ I usually find them in the App Store, but sometimes my friends will recommend some apps to me which are really useful and can help me handle a lot of things.

先行词'apps'是复数，关系代词应使用复数形式'which are'，而不是单数形式'is'。

× I like to use some apps connected with artificial intelligence because they can they can make the work more efficiently and I trust.

✓ I like to use some apps connected with artificial intelligence because they can make the work more efficient and I trust them.

'efficiently'是副词，修饰动词；这里应使用形容词'efficient'来修饰名词'work'。此外，句子缺少宾语'them'，导致不完整。