App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和表达方式。可以先直接回答问题，然后补充具体细节。

例: Recently, I have been using a shopping app called Taobao. It allows me to buy almost anything I need at any time, which is very convenient.

提案: 回答较为简单，句子结构不完整，建议使用连贯的句子并增加细节说明，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I am usually interested in communication apps because they help me stay in touch with my friends and family. Moreover, these apps are convenient as I can use them anytime and anywhere.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意介词使用和句子连贯性，使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: I usually discover new apps through my close friends who often share useful ones with me. Besides, I sometimes find interesting apps on the Internet.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，句子结构更清晰，并增加具体细节。

例: In the future, I would like to use work-related apps because they can help me communicate with my colleagues more quickly and conveniently. Additionally, these apps can assist me in improving my professional skills.

× In recent days I really enjoyed use shopping apps which it which was called Taobao and it's can and I can buy almost everything on it and I can't buy anything in any time.

✓ In recent days I really enjoyed using shopping apps, one of which is called Taobao, and I can buy almost everything on it anytime.

动词enjoy后应接动名词形式using，而不是动词原形use。句中多余的it和which应删除以避免重复。'it's can'结构错误，应改为'I can'。'can't buy anything in any time'表达不正确，应改为'I can buy almost everything on it anytime'。建议简化句子结构，使表达更清晰。

× In recent days I really enjoyed use shopping apps which it which was called Taobao and it's can and I can buy almost everything on it and I can't buy anything in any time.

✓ In recent days I really enjoyed using shopping apps, one of which is called Taobao, and I can buy almost everything on it anytime.

句中出现了多余的代词it和which，导致句子冗余且不通顺。应删除多余代词，保持句子简洁。

× In recent days I really enjoyed use shopping apps which it which was called Taobao and it's can and I can buy almost everything on it and I can't buy anything in any time.

✓ In recent days I really enjoyed using shopping apps, one of which is called Taobao, and I can buy almost everything on it anytime.

'it's can'结构错误，情态动词can不与助动词is连用，应直接使用'I can'。

× I really enjoy communicating apps in my daily life.

✓ I really enjoy communication apps in my daily life.

enjoy后应接动名词或名词，communicating是动名词形式，但此处应使用名词communication来修饰apps。

× I usually use it to communicate with my friends or family.

✓ I usually use them to communicate with my friends or family.

apps是复数，代词应使用复数them，而不是单数it。

× I usually find out different apps from the from my close friends.

✓ I usually find out different apps from my close friends.

短语中重复使用了介词from，应删除多余的from。

× However, sometimes I also find new apps from Internet.

✓ However, sometimes I also find new apps on the Internet.

固定搭配是find apps on the Internet，介词应为on，且Internet前需加定冠词the。

× I think I would use the work apps in the future.

✓ I think I will use work apps in the future.

表达将来意愿时，通常用will而非would，would多用于假设语气。

× It can make me communicate with my colleagues very faster and more convenient.

✓ It can help me communicate with my colleagues much faster and more conveniently.

副词修饰动词communicate，应使用副词形式conveniently而非形容词convenient。比较级前应使用much而非very。

× Besides, I also can use it to improve my work skills.

✓ Besides, I can also use it to improve my work skills.

情态动词can后不应插入副词also，正确位置是can后面，also前面。