App— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra prabhavit bhanne tarikale angreji prayog garnu parcha. Tapai le 'most of the times' ko sato 'most of the time' bhanera prayog garnu parcha ra 'suggested me' ko sato 'suggested to me' bhanera prayog garnu parcha. Uttar lai 3-4 vaakya samma simit rakhnu parcha ra pratyek vaakya ma spashta arth hunu parcha.

例: I recently started using Instagram, mainly to watch reels. My friend suggested that I check out sales on the app. However, I noticed that using Instagram frequently has reduced my productivity and concentration, so I try to limit my usage.

提案: Tapai le 'similarly' shabda ko barambar prayog garnu bhayeko cha, jasle uttar lai thulo redundancy dincha. Tapai le linking words jastai 'also' ya 'in addition' prayog garnu parcha. Uttar lai thap spashta ra sankshipta banau, ra 'I' ko antim vaakya adhuro cha, teslai pura garnu parcha.

例: I'm mostly interested in social media apps because they help me connect with friends and family. In addition, I can follow trends and learn about community events. I also like productivity apps that help me manage my time and organize tasks efficiently.

提案: Tapai ko uttar adhuro ra asangat cha. 'Similarly' ko barambar prayog le uttar lai asangat banaidinchha. Tapai le pratyek vaakya lai pura ra spashta banau, ra linking words ko sahi prayog garnu parcha. Uttar lai 3-4 vaakya samma simit rakhnu parcha ra pratyek vaakya ma spashta arth hunu parcha.

例: I usually find out about new apps through my friends who often search for useful ones. Also, during family gatherings, relatives recommend productivity apps that help with tasks in the kitchen or garden. Most of the apps I use come from these personal recommendations.

提案: Tapai le 'similarly' ko barambar prayog garnu bhayeko cha, jasle uttar lai asangat banaidinchha. Tapai le singular/plural ko prayog ma galti garnu bhayeko cha (e.g., 'apps that has' sahi hoina, 'apps that have' huncha). Uttar lai spashta ra sankshipta banau, ra pratyek vaakya pura ra arthpurna banau.

例: In the future, I would like to use apps that offer personalized and real-time workout plans tailored to my lifestyle. Additionally, I am interested in apps that provide mental health support, including meditation practices. I would also enjoy apps that offer entertainment options.

× My friend suggested me to watch the sales but as soon as I have started using it, I have seen significant decline in my productivity as well as concentration.

✓ My friend suggested that I watch the sales but as soon as I started using it, I saw a significant decline in my productivity as well as concentration.

The phrase 'suggested me to watch' is incorrect; the verb 'suggest' should be followed by 'that' plus a clause or the gerund form. Also, 'have started' and 'have seen' are not appropriate here; simple past tense fits better to indicate completed actions. Use 'started' and 'saw' instead.

× I watch reels most of the times.

✓ I watch reels most of the time.

The phrase 'most of the times' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'most of the time' when referring to frequency in general.

× So I think it is not as much as good to watch frequently.

✓ So I think it is not good to watch frequently.

The phrase 'not as much as good' is incorrect and awkward. Simply saying 'not good' conveys the intended meaning clearly and correctly.

× I'm mostly interested in social media apps which helps me connect with my friends and family.

✓ I'm mostly interested in social media apps which help me connect with my friends and family.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'apps' (plural), so the verb should be plural 'help' instead of singular 'helps'.

× My friends who they regularly search and they found useful.

✓ My friends who regularly search and find useful apps.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'my friends who'; it should be omitted to avoid repetition and maintain correct relative clause structure.

× Most of my family relatives also suggest me about different productivity apps that they can use to increase their productivity in kitchen or in garden and so on.

✓ Most of my family relatives also suggest different productivity apps that they can use to increase their productivity in the kitchen or in the garden and so on.

The verb 'suggest' does not take an indirect object 'me' directly; it should be followed by the object without 'me'. Also, 'in kitchen' and 'in garden' require the definite article 'the'.

× Similarly, the most of the apps that I have used.

✓ Similarly, most of the apps that I have used are helpful.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Adding a verb and completing the thought makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I would love to use apps that has some personalized workout plans and real time workout plans similar to that can adapt to my personal lifestyle.

✓ I would love to use apps that have some personalized workout plans and real-time workout plans similar to that can adapt to my personal lifestyle.

The relative pronoun 'that' refers to 'apps' (plural), so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, 'real time' should be hyphenated as 'real-time' when used as an adjective.

× Similarly, I would also love app that have mental health support with some medication practices and also if I have something in the entertainment.

✓ Similarly, I would also love an app that has mental health support with some meditation practices and also something for entertainment.

The singular noun 'app' requires the article 'an'. The verb should be singular 'has' to agree with 'app'. 'Medication' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'meditation'. The phrase 'if I have something in the entertainment' is unclear and corrected to 'something for entertainment'.